Talk:SPJCM
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This is a wikipedia article, not a placement brochure. Please rewrite the article in wikipedia standards before removing the cleanup tag.
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Why does this always happen to me? Anyway, I tried to clean it up as much as possible by removing things I thought just might be seen as trivial or promotional. While writing this article, I was thinking about "what would a person wanting to know about SPJCM want to read?". There is nothing here that is not factual.--SohanDsouza 18:26, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
See, from my point of view when a wikipedia page has information about ironing facilities, its a sort of advertisement. Putting the placeholder back up. If you get enough people to say I'm wrong, will remove it myself. Dont get me wrong here, but i've only asked for a cleanup; am not marking you with speedy deletion for blatant advertising.
I don't think this sounds like an advert. It is detailed that is all. Ironing facilities would be just as similar as 25000 books in the library. If the later is not an advert then ironing should not be an advert as well. A look around most other school webpages should help clarify the same.--Kanishkaagiwal 05:59, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for your support, Agarwal, but now that I look back at it, I wonder what I was smoking when I wrote the original. It IS kind of ridiculous to go into such detail. I guess I still need to improve my writing, but that is why I am on Wikipedia. Anyway, I have trimmed it down further, and organized it a bit. Hopefully it is good enough now. Although I have left in a lot of the details about the GMBA, as it is in fact a very unique sort of program, even for a 1-year MBA --SohanDsouza 15:55, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
Kanishka, you are assuming most school pages follow guidelines, which is anything but true. And yes, unless its a page about a library the number of books might not be exactly relevant. Page seems good now Sohan, keep up the good work. Banner is down. Anish7 11:05, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
Thanks, Anish7. Yeah, I was in fact just checking out a couple of school pages the other day, and they were rather overdone. It kind of made me realize the flaws in the original version of this article.--SohanDsouza 04:19, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
