Talk:John-Paul McQueen
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This is a far to confusing and disjointed version of events. It makes no real sense as to what happened when and where, some is in past tense others in present. Suggesting a rewrite.
The latest version is much better, it follows the story in a logical and chronological fashion. I would suggest it stays as it is with additions added as the storyline progresses. Mithos7 11:58, 26 January 2007 (UTC)
The link at the bottom (external links) is broken. Needs to be rewritten.
