Talk:Kevin Weeks
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This page should not be deleted because it is from my website, angelfire.com/blog/organizedcrime even e-mail me at johnnieupahts@lycos.com the webmaster's e-mail and you will see that it is OK. - User:JohnUpahts
The content on this page and the other Winter Hill-related pages are great, however (with all due respect) your writing is poor and these entries read very awkwardly. I suggest you self-edit, unless someone else can do it without undermining the quality of the content. What you're saying on this (and Flemmi's) page is great, but its how you say it that could use alot of work.
Benijuana 12:11, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] === npov? ===
Specifically, I think the sentences "Weeks was released from federal prison in early 2005 and has began a new life, supposedly not involving organized crime. Only time will tell if the former mob boss will stay clean." seem pretty biased. Is there a way to restate this? Jodamn 06:15, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
