Talk:MacArthur Park
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Wow PAint A bad pIcture, Its not as bad as this article makes it seem, there are a number of rivitalization efforts going on and the area is improving substantionally.
[edit] Is that really the name of the group?
I find this sentence a bit awkward: "Beginning in 2002 the Los Angeles Police Department, and business, and community leaders of the Alliance: Macarthur Park led a revitalization effort ..."
As I read it, there's a community group called "Alliance: MacArthur Park." Is that right? If so, I'd like to suggest rewording that sentence to something like this:
"Beginning in 2002 the Los Angeles Police Department, along with business [NOTE: I'm taking out this comma anyhow :)] and community leaders of the community group Alliance: Macarthur Park, led a revitalization ..."
The problem with a group with a feistily punctuated name is that it looks odd in sentences unless explained a bit, like e.e. cummings.
timbo 05:23, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
