User talk:Redbird 41

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Contents 1 Ty Olsson 2 Cronus page 3 Herry page 4 Vandalism to Talk:Ultimate Wolverine 5 Hercules edits 5.1 Hera 6 Piccolo

[edit] Ty Olsson

A tag has been placed on Ty Olsson, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done because the article seems to be a biographical account about a person, group of people, or band, but it does not indicate how or why he/she/they is/are notable. If you can indicate why Ty Olsson is really notable, I advise you to edit the article promptly, and also put a note on Talk:Ty Olsson. Any admin should check for such edits before deleting the article. Feel free to leave a note on my talk page if you have any questions about this. Please read our criteria for speedy deletion, particularly item 7 under Articles. You might also want to read our general biography criteria. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself. To contest the tagging and request that admins should wait a while for you to assert his/her/their notability, please affix the template {{hangon}} to the page, and then immediately add such an assertion. It is also a very good idea to add citations from reliable sources to ensure that your article will be verifiable. DVD+ R/W 00:37, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Cronus page

Redbird, I'm a little confused about why Cronus merits his own page when there's plenty of space in the current article for discussion of the character. I don't object to removing the tag (you're effectively contesting, I suppose), but why bother with a separate page. You can reply here. Thanks!--Kchase02 T 04:24, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

I'm not Redbird, but looking at his/her contributions, he/she seems to be adding random and not particularly carefully done pages in relation the Class of the Titans TV show without regard for whether the new articles are needed or even notable enough subjects to warrant one. Again, as I'm not him/her, I could be quite wrong about this, but that seems to be his/her pattern of behaviour. Personally, I agree that there is plenty of room in the original article for the show for the same information to be discussed, and in fact, pretty much all of the information on the seperate page is already mentioned in the show's article in greater detail. Xanthophiliac 07:23, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for the msg. Since you've already started a relevant discussion at the talk page, I'll defer this to your judgment, Xanthophiliac. Careful of WP:BITE, please. Redbird has less than 50 edits.--Kchase02 T 07:38, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads-up about WP:BITE. I do forget sometimes, so the reminder's very helpful. Thanks again. Xanthophiliac 07:49, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Herry page

As a heads-up, I've added a tag for speedy deletion to Herry (Class of the Titans). First off, if you're going to contest it, please do NOT remove the tag yourself and instead follow the instructions for contesting by explaining reasons for the article on its Talk page. As for why I've added the tag, it's for similar reasons for why the Cronus article is also being disputed -- the policy is that fictional characters should be discussed on the article for the work they originate from (in this case, Class of the Titans), unless the character has enough information to them that it can warrant a seperate article. In this case, everything important about Herry, and even the little details, have already been covered in the main article, so having a seperate article is redundant. Again, if you would like to contest this, please do NOT remove the tag yourself. Use the Talk page instead. Xanthophiliac 07:48, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Vandalism to Talk:Ultimate Wolverine

Regarding your "I HATE ALL OF YOU!" vandalism of the Ultimate Wolverine talk page:[1]

Welcome to Wikipedia. We invite everyone to contribute constructively to our encyclopedia. Take a look at the welcome page if you would like to learn more about contributing. However, unconstructive edits are considered vandalism. If you continue in this manner you may be blocked from editing without further warning. Please stop, and consider improving rather than damaging the work of others. Thank you. Doczilla 06:44, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Hercules edits

Your enthusiasm is interesting, but you need to slow down on your edits. You are making many mistakes. Slow down. Make one edit at a time and learn from how other editors respond. Here is an example from just one section you added to Hercules (Marvel Comics). You wrote:

[edit] Hera

Hera enmity towards the Prince of Power had becomed the same as before now that he estranged him self from her daughter Hebe. For this she comtinued to make him fall in love with many mortal woman who grow old and die while he stays young.

Here are some problems with what you wrote:

Fiction is supposed to be reported in present tense in Wikipedia.

Hera's enmity should not appear as Hera enmity. Make the possessive clear.

the Prince of Power Just say Hercules so even people who read only that section will know who you're talking about.

become, not becomed

the same as before Before what?

himself not him self

For this should have a comma after it.

continued with n not comtinued with m

many mortal women plural, not many mortal woman singular. There is no reason to make the word women appear in bold.

The information appears out of context, in a way that does not enhance our understanding of Hercules. Hera's actions toward Hercules can be relevant. Her attitude adds nothing without information on what she is doing.

You provide no source for any of this, so it should not be there at all.

Please take your time, make careful edits, and enjoy contributing to Wikipedia. You appear to have some useful information. Doczilla 07:35, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Piccolo

Redbird, Piccolo Jr. is not in the game Dragon Ball Advanced Adventure. Please supply evidence to prove it or stop putting it in there. Beowulph 02:47, 7 February 2007 (UTC)