Talk:Richard Patrick
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"Richard had some fun with his unorthodox aural stylings when he spent two and a hal years as the touring guitarist in Nine Inch Nails until he chose to leave the band in 1992."
What are unorthodox aural stylings? I'm not sure this makes any sense, even in context. kibibu 06:45, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Poor phrasing
"For a long period, Patrick had a long history with alcoholism"
Well, he still has a long *history* - I mean, assuming that's true. Perhaps it should be
"For a long period, Patrick had problems with alcoholism", or something like that.
Rob Cranfill 18:57, 17 January 2007 (UTC)
