Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Grand Duchess Olga Nikolaevna of Russia
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[edit] Grand Duchess Olga Nikolaevna of Russia
I'd like to bring this article up to a good article rating. Please look at the content and make any suggestions to improve upon it. Also please look at the images used in the article, comment on whether they are appropriate and whether they are in the public domain. --Bookworm857158367 05:50, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Yannismarou
- The lead should be expanded per WP:LEAD.
- The same inconsistancey with the citations I mentioned in Maria's article.
- "From her earliest years she was known for her compassionate heart and desire to help others" IMO a citation is needed here? And how was this desire to help expressed?
- ""The eldest, Olga Nicolaevna, possessed a remarkably quick brain," recalled Gilliard." Gilliard who? When you mention a scholar or wirter etc. for the first time within the text, I think it is better to write his full name.
- "Olga also occasionally found her mother's attitude trying.". "Trying" or "tiring": I am not sure if this is a typo or not.
- "Rasputin had released ardent, though by all accounts completely innocent in nature, letters written by the Tsarina and the four grand duchesses to him." You definitely have to cite this sentence.
- After reading all these articles about the Russian family and the canonization of 2000 by the Russian Church I thought of something maybe useful for (at least some of) the articles: How was this canonization received? Was there any debate? Controversies? Reactions? It could also be the subject of a seperate article.
- Note 6 is empty. Something is wrong there.
Another well-written article. For me it is almost A-class not far away from FA, but, for reasons I explained in Maria's review, I cannot rate it higher than B.--Yannismarou 16:09, 5 January 2007 (UTC)
