Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Peter Cetera
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[edit] Peter Cetera
This article has received a major overhaul to include all aspects of a musical artist's career, from an overview to background information, as well as documenting chart positions of all his releases. As such, it appears to be rather comprehensive and written from a neutral point of view. Now that it appears to be complete without any superfluous information, I am requesting a peer review for a Quality Scale grading, with a goal of either FA or A Class. RPrinter 20:49, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Yannismarou
A start-article IMO. It still needs a lot of work, before a peer-review can actually be helpful; I would suggest a second peer-review, after the suggestions of this one are implemented. These are some initial remarks:
- The lead is too short. It should be expanded per WP:LEAD, so as to be a comprehensive summary of the article.
- Any picture? At least fair-used tagged.
- "Early Life" is stubby. Can you expand it?
- The next three sections are listy, almost trivia, with stubby paragraphs. This is not a nice prose. Maybe this could also be helpful to you.
- Per MoS do not wikilink single years; only full dates (January 1, 2000).
- "Actor" is stubby. Merge or expand.
- Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
- And you have no inline citations; not even references!
- Maybe you would like to check in WP:FA for recently promoted articles about singers and musicians in general, so as to take some ideas.--Yannismarou 19:58, 4 February 2007 (UTC)
