Talk:Phivos (songwriter)

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[edit] The desperate condition of the article

Or: Why I marked this article with 5 tags...

Like an advertisement

First off, it's written like an advertisement. Read:

  • Phivos has the talent to inspire new music ideas and to suggest new music stars, while the greatest greek singers trust his knowledge, instinct and talent in order their records to take the first place in the greek charts.
  • His perfect productions often become an example for everyone in his field, and he has signed contracts with the most successful record companies.
  • The music of Phivos became an inspiration source for the greatest celebration of the greek spirit and sports.

Both untrue AND against the proper neutral style of an encyclopedia.

No references

This page does not cite any references at all at the moment. That's against WikiPedia's standards. If no reference comes up any time soon, I'll go on and mark the article for speedy deletion.

The links

All the page was written with a link to Phivos (the god, who is irrelevant with the songwriter). This indicates that the person who wrote it did not have the WikiPedia standards in mind (in this case, a word should be linked only once in a paragraph and only if it is related to the article). Moreover, there's a link to every singer and company mentioned in the article, even if they have been linked before and even if the articles do not exist (and probably won't be created any time soon, since they are of little interest for the English WikiPedia). Teo64x 15:38, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

And of course, we shouldn't forget the label "The Legendary Greek Composer" in this revision, which I erased on sight. Teo64x 14:49, 27 March 2007 (UTC)