Talk:AquaLogic
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This page feels like an excerpt from a BEA marketing web site. Can anyone with more insight provide a complete NPOV rewrite? 193.15.228.29 08:18, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
Yeah, probably cut-and-paste. Informative nevertheless. Removed some marketing crud. (Stumbled upon this when actually looking for information)
Ahh, so this is where you come from 198.129.218.190. The reason that I nominated this article for deletion is that - in my view - it reads like marketing copy. The product page is also all out of proportion to the company itself. We could work on it and improve it instead of outright deletion if that's what users think is best.
The first step I would suggest, is merging this product page with the company page itself based on WP:CORP#Recommendations_for_products_and_services:
- "Information on products and services should generally be included in the article on the company itself, unless the company is so large that this would make the article unwieldy".
This was worked very well on the i-flex page (which I think you've seen) where we merged a seperate Flexcube product page into the body of the text.Saganaki- 00:36, 18 October 2006 (UTC)
Works fine as is, especially if wikified. Many major product lines of various companies are kept separate - for example a line of cars. Please revert to a more informative edition. 66.248.222.34 21:14, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
It is easier to use separate articles on notable products, no need to merge. Wikify and possibly expand. (24.4.99.215 02:42, 24 March 2007 (UTC))
