Talk:Biosphere (musician)

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This page should be moved to Biosphere (musician) since it's not a band, just one guy. 80.203.115.12 14:03, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Who's going to? --Gravity Control

Never mind, I already did. --Gravity Control

Ok, so, I changed a lot. Mostly it was just spelling, grammar, and general usage of the English language, but I feel that there are a couple key issues that need to be addressed: - IMHO, Biosphere's early albums are in no way comparable to Aphex Twin's SAW 85-92. SAW stands as an amateur work, and enjoys rather sub-par production. Biosphere and come and gone from Bel Canto & Bleep at this point, he was in no way an amateur. That; and his production skills on his early work trumped those of RDJ. The comparison is, at best, forced. I left the comparison to SAW-II later in this article, as I feel it makes a little bit more sense, but I still feel the comparison is meaningless. Unless someone steps up to defend the inclusion of a reference to SAW II, I intend to remove it when I find something better to stick in its place. The reference to Coil, actually, makes a great deal of sense, and I feel that it should stay. - I don't feel that Biosphere's early work was ambient techno by any means, and changed that reference to be ambient house. Ambient Techno, as I see it, refers to things such as Monolake's "Gravity", Plastikman's "Consumed", and just about anything on the Basic Channel label with the possible exception of Scion. Again, I feel this comparison to be forced. A comparison with the ambient-house stylings of The Orb makes a great deal more sense to me.

There remains a lot to be fixed in this article - I think the trivia section needs work - but I'll get to that soon. Sorry if these edits made anyone angry, feel free to argue my points as always. Kobresia 06:13, 6 March 2006 (UTC)

The chronology in the "1991-Present" section could be improved. A 2006 album is mentioned before the 2004 performance in Detroit, for example. bneely 18:54, 7 March 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, agreed. I'll get on that. Kobresia 20:03, 7 March 2006 (UTC)

Kobresia...hmm. Isn't that a flower? Because, I don't know. I wouldn't call a song something like Jonquil or Daisy. --Gravity Control