Talk:Earth Girl Arjuna
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[edit] Cleanup work
Hoo boy, does this article need some cleanup. -It's not NPOV -the overview needs to have those bad image files fixed, the quotes are unencyclopedic and should be removed, the whole thing sounds too promotional, and goes into too much detail of the first episode -Praise for the soundtrack needs to be cut out, not NPOV -character bios seem alright, but could be trimmed a bit
Also, the pages for the Arjuna soundtracks are very sparse with no real info. They should probably be deleted, and merged into this page.
I can probably do this cleanup myself, but any help or suggestions would be nice. --Marcg106 03:43, 3 October 2005 (UTC)
[edit] My edits
I have done a major revision to this article. That is, I kinda rewrote the whole thing from scratch (well, there's a few lines left from the old version). I removed the images of the characters, as they'd been readded still without rationale for fair use (though mostly cause they really didn't fit). I liked the first one though, so I wrote a rationale for it myself. The page is definately shorter now, but it also reads like an article, rather than a review. I have also added some commentary on the themes of the show, taken from the creator/director in an interview he did. Overall, I feel I've cited everything more than adequately, and as it covers every major facet of the series, I'm self-promoting it to a B-class article. There's still some missing I'm sure, minor characters, etc. But it's acceptable now anyway. If there's anything else anyone wants, let me know here and I'll see what I can do. -Goldom (t) (Review) 09:42, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Still to do
- Better explanation of the ending and last 3 episodes - ..uh, right now I can't even think how to summarize it on this bullet point, so I'll get back to that later.
- Clean up the soundtrack pages which right now have no content.
- ?
