Talk:Fate/hollow ataraxia
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[edit] Names
The whole Shirou/Avenger thing looks really, really messy. Might I suggest changing it? (Ie: Use only one name) Mirioki 15:15, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Quality
I think the majority of this article needs to be rewritten, not for content, but for phrasing and organization. Most of the stuff is poorly written and appears to just be copy and pasted from somewhere else.
[edit] The BIG problem
All right, the big problem with the Ataraxia page is that the spoilers are ALL on the main page... which means one thing... We need to make character and synopsis pages and move the spoilers into respective character pages...
By the way, is this copy pasted from the Moonlit World website? If so then... ugh... not again... Oh well, Moonlit World seems to be the only reference for non-japanese speakers, but it's a pity that we have to depend on that site for information... Mirioki 23:35, 4 May 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Cleanup & Wikification
I will try to fix, wikify, clean-up and re-furnish this entry. I've added a better introduction, more details in the infobox, and will try to re-write and clean the plot summary and character info later. - Ganryuu 15:30, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
- I will not be touching this article until FSN itself is finished; this is a bloody mess in and of itself and to tackle this on too...meh, I'll probably lose interest before I even try. Terek 05:20, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
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- Maybe you'll have more vested interest once someone tries to clean it up more... like my pathetic attempts in the FSN page. And yes, this is a mess... Mirioki 05:27, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
- Haha, remember the "Berserker>Shirou" picture that Beast's Lair complained about? Well, to be vocal on a related issue, should we really have a topic in the FHA table of contents entitled, "Shirou dies again"?! Terek 20:55, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
- I agree that it's a bit out of place, but lets leave those details for later. I suppose that the first thing this clusterfuck needs is being made look more like the FSN page, so how about creating separate pages for each character with a small introduction in the main article, and then putting the plot summary in a separate article as with the FSN Scenarios? I'm willing to do this, not right now, but I can go at it little by little. Ephyon 16:38, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
