Talk:Jabal Amel
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[edit] POV
I found 4 instances of clear-cut POV editing in the first few paragraphs. Please see WP:MOS for formatting. Here are some tips:
- Don't use weasel words.
- Verify your claims. See WP:CITE.
- Don't just list 30 names in a paragraph. It is tremendously unnecessary clutter.
- Consider the Israeli point of view. The way you present the Lebanese makes it clear that you are against the Israelis. Nobody here cares to hear political fluff. If you want to include sections about wars with Israel and the like, it might do you well to find an Israel Wikiproject and coordinate with them what should be inserted just as they should coordinate with you what should be inserted. It is standard Wikipedia policy, and for now, I'm removing the sections on Israel as it is to potent to cause edit wars.
And so on. I'll put this page on my watchlist. JHMM13 
18:33, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Image
I have removed this image as it serves no encyclopedic function. It appears to be a map of southern Lebanon (my best guess) with no labels or anything that would make it encyclopedic. As an outsider, I have no idea what its purpose in the article is. JHMM13 18:42, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
