Talk:Jacques Elong Elong
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[edit] Copyedit
I did a little copyediting of the article, I hope this is an improvement. One sentence was a problem: "Being a tricky player, he can sometimes be on defensive minds but can also be geared up for a goal." This is very hard to understand; I took it to mean "He is a versatile player, able to serve in defence but also assist in goal scoring." If I misunderstood the sentence, please rewrite this. Cheers, Walkerma 02:01, 4 February 2007 (UTC)
