Talk:Jobriath
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This page could do with an NPOV edit quercus robur 09:31, 14 Dec 2003 (UTC)
- That and some clarification. For example, what is this Wanamaker's? --Merovingian✍Talk 13:33, Aug 30, 2004 (UTC)
- And what was the guy's rn? Lee M 23:18, 26 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- I don't think I've yet seen a Wiki article this poorly written.
- In particular, the phrase "Jobriath himself drifted off into a strange, private hell of gender contortions." is just too overwrought for words, nevermind seemingly a tad dubious in its assertion. Unfortunately, I'm not familiar enough with Jobriath's biography to fix it competently. --Yst 18:19, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
- The article also could have few copy-violations, unless the articles I've seen have been taken from wikipedia. The articles that have had been taken from were obviously written in a none wiki style. When I've got a bit of free time I'll work on it. I sort of understand what the phrase above is getting at in relation to Jobriath but it is a very dubious statement. Englishrose 20:09, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
- In particular, the phrase "Jobriath himself drifted off into a strange, private hell of gender contortions." is just too overwrought for words, nevermind seemingly a tad dubious in its assertion. Unfortunately, I'm not familiar enough with Jobriath's biography to fix it competently. --Yst 18:19, 4 February 2006 (UTC)