Talk:Pat Zalewski
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[edit] Regarding this paragraph;
Professor Robert Ellwood came to New Zealand and included the History of Whare ra temple and Thoth Hermes in the late 1980 after extensive investigation wrote the book Islands of the Dawn, which included a detailed chapter on the Golden Dawn in New Zealand.Ellwood also met with ex members of Whare Ra on a trip to Havelock North.
Because it doesn't make sence in the above form I have edited it to say;
Professor Robert Ellwood came to New Zealand in the late 1980's and, after extensive investigation, including meeting with ex members of the Whare Ra on a trip to Havelock North, included the History of the Whare Ra Temple and the Thoth Hermes Temple in his book 'Islands of the Dawn', which included a detailed chapter on the Golden Dawn in New Zealand.
This is what I think it means but I urge anyone who actually *knows* what it means to correct my editing at your earliest convenience.
This article needs general wikifying.
Morgan Leigh 02:57, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Islands of the Dawn
Regarding this sentence Ellwood's interviews with Zalewski and material from his first book "Secret Inner Order Rituals of the Golden Dawn" are included in Ellwood's publication. I have editied this because it seems to say that 'Islands of the Dawn' includes transcripts of interviews with Pat Zalewski and material from Pat's book 'Secret Inner Order Rituals of the Golden Dawn'. While the material covered in 'Islands of the Dawn' does indeed seem to be based on interviews with Pat and/or material in Pat's book, there are not any transcripts of such interviews in 'Islands of the Dawn'. Ellwood does include some quotes which he attributed to Pat and does refer to Pat's books, but includes no extracts as such. Morgan Leigh 23:11, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Correspondence Course and Forum
I want to add the citations needed to the line about his course and forum. However, the only documentation on the web I know of for the course is Zalewski's pdf advertisement, and the only site I know of regarding his forum is the yahoogroups page itself. Would adding these links to the article be considered spam?The One True Fred 07:20, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
- I think the pdf ad might be over the edge but I think a link to the yahoo group is ok. I mean I am not an expert on the ins and outs of wikipolicy but it seems to me that if there is a place on the web that refers to the person then add it. For example, the article about The Ford Motor Company has links to the Ford commercial websites.
- Morgan Leigh 03:32, 24 February 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Tarot and Rituals & Commentaries
I citation is needed for the existance of these works. They have been reviewed by Jeffrey Kupperman in the Journal of the Western Mystery Traditions at http://www.jwmt.org/v1n4/gdtarotbooks.html & http://www.jwmt.org/v1n0/zalewskireview.html respectivly. Could someone add the citation who knows how?
