Talk:Peter Kavanagh
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The article reads like an obituary written by a family member. The tone needs to better reflect that of an encyclopedic article. Please see Wikipedia:Guide to writing better articles for assistance with that. The article needs to be wikified by linking words in the article to other relevant articles. This article also needs to be categorized. ···日本穣? · Talk to Nihonjoe 20:39, 17 January 2007 (UTC)