Talk:Post-Enies Lobby arc
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[edit] Name Arc
First: Good Idea and Good Job!
- Second: i think it's better to wait for some other chapters, and then rename this arc as "Water Seven Pt. 2" or something similar. Enies Lobby Aftermath? Uhm... Cuttyflam 13:45, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Ending the arc
I think that chapter 440 could be called an epiolgue on the ARC,as the crew have now departed for Mermen Island.Think the next chapter could be called "Mermen Island Arc" ,if nothing major will come in the crews progress there (witch most certainly will). New Babylon
[edit] Grammar
Guys, this page is a mess grammatically. Could someone clean it up?
Okay, I did another section of it. Here's what I did and why. I rewrote the last three paragraphs to start with. Also, I broke the final paragraph into two sections. I also removed the reference to chapters. This is a summary of the manga, not a chapter by chapter summary. I broke it into scenes instead. Finally, Blackbeard is not demonstrating new abilities, he already had them. This is just the first time the reader has seen them. So I changed that.
Two more things that I did not add but might be added. 1) The fact that Ace's hat on the ground symbolizes his defeat. 2) The symbolic meaning of "Darkness defeating the Sun." Basically meaning, darkness defeating light. Those are more speculation and extrapolation than fact though so I don't know if they truly belong. --AstoVidatu 07:01, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Deletion Bit
Article was tagged for deletion. Response:
"Plot summaries. Wikipedia articles on works of fiction should contain real-world context and sourced analysis, offering detail on a work's achievements, impact or historical significance, not solely a summary of that work's plot. A plot summary may be appropriate as an aspect of a larger topic."
It is an aspect of a larger topic. However, in retrospect, the CP9 saga summaries have become leviathans, both wordy and long. This is not their intended purpose. Therefore, I am going to move that the CP9 Saga be merged and condensed. This is especially true of the completed sagas. --AstoVidatu 18:32, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
Sorry, I lied. This is a different arc. As it is in progress, it can't be edited too extensively. However, I'll try to trim it a bit.--AstoVidatu 18:43, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
