Talk:Rudolph Moshammer
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I've tidied the 'His Bizarre Death' section, but could someone have another look? We really need sources including in there, espcecially since its about a current event. The JPS 21:15, 16 Jan 2005 (UTC)
I've tried to make the text a bit more English. However, I have left a few phrases I suspect are translated directly from German which I cannot think of how to rephrase: "base of existence", "Daisy was Moshammer's own treasure". Any ideas? --Garethhamilton 21:33, 16 Jan 2005 (UTC)
- I had exactly the same idea, but when I edited the text Garethhamilton's changes did not show. Only after my edit did I find out that I had actually tried what someone else had already done. I do apologize although it's certainly not my fault. Wikipedia has been acting rather weird these past few days. <KF> 22:25, Jan 16, 2005 (UTC)
