Talk:Seraphim (band)
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Seraphim the band belongs at Seraphim (band) This article is going to serve as a simple redirect to seraph. The one world article should be the original meaning of the noun, not a band that simply took the word as their name.
[edit] Over-enthusiasm
There has been a lot of very enthusiastic language used in this article, but please remember this is an encyclopedia, not a place to advertise or hail a band you like. Describing them in the opening sentance as "an amazing heavy metal band" is clearly in no way appropriate for wikipedia. Almost every line in the entire background section needed verification or citation of sources. The facts may well be true, but if so provide the source, because otherwise, given the clear signs of attempts at promoting the band in the article, it must be assumed they are false. I have removed some of the points and left others, because otherwise the article would become either empty or simply filled with requests for citation/verification. Prophaniti 11:36, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
