Talk:Sundiata Acoli
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I edited the comment concerning the failure of acoli and shakur to explain how foerster was shot. It originally read: "Many claim that he is innocent but fail to explain how officer Foerster, who left behind a wife and daughter, was shot twice in the head with his own service weapon." I edited out "who left behind a wife and daughter" becuase this only seeks to provide an unbalanced and not at all journalistic sympathy to Officer Foerster. Please state this fact in a different area of the article where it doesn't stand to cliud our reasoning regarding his murder. -anarcho_hipster
This is a biased article, sounds like it was written by a white member of the NJ State police, an example of a biased statement... "Some question why Shakur, who has been living on an exotic island in the Caribbean since the early 1980's, hasn't once tried to broker a deal exchanging her surrender for Acoli's release."
exotic island?? turning oneself in to a government that one has no faith in, not very logical, and very P
The line about the failure to explain the police officer's murder is very weaselish, it brings a feeling of illegitimacy to Acoli, and Shakur's actions, almost painting them as guilty, though the circumstances suggest otherwise. There's really no need for it, because it really does sound almost weasel word perfect. 67.182.101.74 10:57, 17 August 2006 (UTC)Logan
