Talk:The Death of the West
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This page is horribly unbalanced and needs serious revision. Throughout there are phrases like "shows that such and such is true", as if it were an undesputable fact. The language of this article needs to be reworked, or the article needs to be deleted. -Ross 5:05 pm PST 11-1-05
I don't think that it is so unbalanced that deletion would be warranted, the words "argues" and "believes" were used enough that I didn't feel as if the wiki were treating the arguments as fact, although I do agree with your basic point that the word choice is poor. Also, statements like "humanistic 'culture of death'" often strike me as brimming with sarcasm, but in the end that's probably how those people actually talk. M0nkey 19:28, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
The article is poorly written and badly needs some improvement. I'll try to rewrite it when I have spare time as I've just read the book, and consequently, have a better idea about its content. Vincent Shooter 14:39, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
