Talk:Theatre in Pakistan
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[edit] Farrukh Nigar Aziz
Comment by 24.7.113.102 that was inserted into the article:
- (Edit: This person is unknown in the arena of the performing arts or literature. To list her along with Manto, who is one of the best short story writers in Urdu, is incomprehensible).
I figured it was more appropriate on the talk page, so moved it here. Whitejay251 15:30, 20 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Cleanup
I've completed a basic cleanup: excising copyright violations and minor changes in the format to conform with wikipedia standards. This really needs to be looked over by someone who knows about the subject. It needs to be made one consistent article instead of a hodgepodge about different things relating to theatre in Pakistan. How the different sections relate to each other needs to be explained and the organizations and people mentioned need to be evaluated as to whether they really are the most notable for inclusion (see for instance the note above). This may require major rewriting, if not this article needs copyediting for grammar and word choice throughout. It also needs to be sourced. Whitejay251 22:00, 3 September 2006 (UTC)
