Talk:Tourism in Sydney
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[edit] This article needs to be cleaned up!!
I think this article needs a major clean up, it is full of unsourced statements ect. Some ideas I have to improve it:
- Pictures-First of all, the picture of the Sydney Opera House is always used in article about Sydney Tourism, maybe if someone could find a picture with lot's of tourists in Sydney areas or landmarks.
- Information-Most of the information has unsourced statements, also it is written to well.
That's all I can think of for now, but if anyone else has any other suggestions do add them on this page. Jackp 06:01, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
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- You are too funny Jack. I've have tidied up bits and peices of your work, yet you only reinstate it. --Merbabu 06:07, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
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Not in this article, I've left every edit made too it. I [finally] understand Sydney is up to an excellent standard. But this article just needs a tidy up. Jackp 08:01, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Jack, it is clear from this last comment that you do not use the history tab. I suggest you look up, click "article" then click "history". --Merbabu 08:09, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- UPDATED, now cleaned up as requested. There is not much in this article that wasn't POV tourist brochure fluff. --Merbabu 08:17, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Expansion tag
I added the 'expand' tag because the amount of information is fairly scarce. Maybe if more information on shopping districts, cafes, malls and so on can be added, and some more descriptive pictures of tourism in the city (such as tourists around a popular city attraction), than the Sydney Opera House, because it is very obvious that the Opera House is a hot spot for tourism.