Talk:United States Congressional Delegations from New York
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[edit] The lead
The lead paragraph could use some work.
- "Over the years, New York has undergone too much demographic change to consider each district to be a continuation of the same numbered district before reapportionment. For example, Carolyn Maloney has represented the 9th District since 1993, but is considered the successor of S. William Green since the current 9th takes up nearly all of the former territory of the 15th District as it existed before 1993."
- "Too much" adds nothing and the whole thing needs to be re-written usiung statistics and sources. It's written in a very informal style. Howard Cleeves 00:03, 26 March 2007 (UTC)
