Talk:Velocette
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[edit] Clutch
In the course of copyediting, I discovered a discrepency. In 1921, the Veloce still has no clutch. In 1922, the clutch is introduced, and it is similar to the "previous clutch." Huh? Was there a clutch or wasn't there? —comment added by Dickumbrage(t/c)
"Last clutch" does not mean "previous clutch", but the last Velocette clutch (circa 1967).Seasalt 13:02, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Compliments
fantastic article, wikipedia is superb.—comment added by 195.92.67.71(t/c)
[edit] Copy needs edit
The timeline is a straight lift from the external website mentioned and as such needs a lot of work, if only to turn it into good english. GraemeLeggett 12:27, 21 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- This needs to be rewritten and incorporated into the history section, and the entire article could use some expansion. There's a little more information at John Taylor (Velocette) that could be incorporated here. — Catherine\talk 15:30, 20 June 2006 (UTC)