User talk:Zoli Elo
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[edit] Infiniti G20
Took a look per your request. I did a fair amount of cleaning up. There are still some issues with the article; some relatively obscure technical terms could probably still stand to be explained (example: lowport vs. highport), the entire "Trivia" section is organized pretty randomly and the reliability problem section (I renamed it) could still use a rewrite. Also, there is a lot of work to be done in terms of adding more inline citations via footnotes. If you take a look at any featured article, you will see how many footnotes are generally used (a lot!). You have done a nice job so far so keep working on it! -Big Smooth 18:40, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
- You did a far better job than I could have. Thank you and I will do as you suggest. Zoli Elo 18:49, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Troop sleeper
I think that your article is close to GA for a topic like this. The main problem I see it that it is one long section. I am sure that if it is broken up a bit, it will make it through to being a GA. Zoli Elo 04:41, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- FYI, I took your suggestion and divided the article into logical (IMO) subsections. Please let me know what you think.--Lordkinbote 22:06, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
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- Done Zoli Elo 05:18, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Oppama
Hi. You created an article at Oppama, which I just redirected to Yokosuka, Kanagawa. While the Nissan plant is called the Oppama Plant, Oppama itself is just a subdivision of Yokosuka. The information you wrote is a good summary of the plant, and its importance to the area, so I copied it directly to the appropriate section of the Yokosuka article. For what its worth, the Japanese wikipedia does not have an article on Oppama, and mentions the plant (albeit briefly) in the Yokosuka page. (ja:横須賀市#産業 if you can read Japanese). If you think that this was out of line, please bring it up at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Japan where there are many more eyes (and more opininions, I'm sure). Neier 11:44, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Wikiproject Automobiles Notification
Hi Zoli Elo, you were on the list of members at WikiProject Automobiles and we are introducing a new way of listing members, as the old list was becoming too long. Our new method involves having all of our members in a category.
To add yourself to the category just add the userbox to your user page by putting {{Wiki Auto Project}} where you want the userbox. Alternatively if you don't like the userbox you can add [[Category:WikiProject Automobiles members|Zoli Elo]] to your userpage.
If you no longer wish to be a member of the project, simply don't add the userbox or category, there's no pressure. Thanks for your time, James086Talk | Contribs 04:43, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
