Talk:.458 Winchester Magnum
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What is wrong with this entry?
- I don't think that it's biased, but things such as "You will want to handload" and other sentences are not encyclopaedic. Take "you will want to handload your cartridges, as factory ammunition is not cheap" and replace it with "The cost of these rounds are prohibitive, leading to a high number of handloaded cartridges" and link "handloaded cartridges" to handloader or whatever the article on self-reloaded cartridges is.
- Since it is pointed out that a high powered version of this cartridge exists it might be useful to know how close handloaders can come should they wish to approach the one using the special powder. This is partially addressed with the line that says "with good handloads" but doesn't address the point directly.Es330td 20:04, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
