Talk:Akira (character)
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This is pathetic. I fixed up the grammar on the recent revision, but the language is still much too vague. --Closedmouth 12:18, 29 October 2005 (UTC)
I gave it another once over with the grammar and im happy that the spelling and grammar is ok... it still needs to be wikified however, and im sure that will lend to the overall performance of the article. Im about to begin wikification, but im on a short time frame so may not finish it before i have to leave. S3raph1m 16:49, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
Nope i didnt think id have time to finish the wikification process. Well its a start, it could use one of the infobox templates and a photo of him, probably a still from the film. Would help to break up the text... ill have a look when i get home, see what i can find S3raph1m 17:00, 25 January 2006 (UTC)