Talk:Battle of Ulundi
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[edit] I have removed
these lines added by 168.209.98.35:
- The Zulu warriors was armed with a short stabbing spear and protected with a raw hide shield.
Because I do not think it belongs in the middle of a paragraph on the structure of the British force.
- This time the British soldiers made sure that the ammunition boxes could be opened, not making the same mistake twice. During the Isandlwana battle on the previous campain the veteran British forces were dessimated by the Zulu warriors because of this small oversight.
The importance of the ammunition boxes at Isandlwana is disputed and this is discussed in that battle's article. I don't think the line really belongs in the article, as the ammunition boxes are not something considered important in the British victory at Ulundi, and their significance at Isandlwana is debatable.
I have cleaned up 168.209.98.35's other additions and removed 'great' from the line about Nelson Mandela. I've posted this so if someone disagrees with my removal of these lines, we can discuss it here. Cheers, --Loopy 00:30, 21 November 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Assegais or rifles?
Our article repeatedly alludes to the Zulus being armed only with spears. But our first reference notes that Cetshwayo had purchased "tens of thousands of muskets and rifles" and captured a thousand Martini-Henry rifles. Since their army was 20,000 strong, surely it seems likely that most of the Zulus were armed with firearms? -- Securiger 07:01, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Irrelevant and PV remark removed
Removed the snide anti-white comparison between Mandela's and Cetshwayo's imprisonment: "...[Cetshwayo was] sent into exile on Robben Island, near Cape Town - the same island Nelson Mandela would be imprisoned on 87 years later." Not only completely irrelevant, but seems to make a direct comparison between the actions of the British and the Aparteid regime. Mandela was an arguably unjustly incarcerated political prisoner; Cetshwayo was the defeated leader of a belligerent and brutal civilisation. Comparison is unfair and POV.
[edit] Is this original?
I don't know if it is just me, but this seems to be narrated or copied straight out of a book. Should there be some type of reference to original sources? Disregard this message if it's not true, but the style of writing seems to indicate this. Mulyahnto 19:42, 22 January 2007 (UTC)Mulyahnto
