Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Henry Carey (writer)

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[edit] Henry Carey (writer)

The Henry Carey (writer) needs to be properly formatted. It looks to be properly referenced and I think the only thing wrong with it is that it looks like one big block of text. Rejnal 04:42, 19 February 2006 (UTC)

Please define. It is at a very high academic level now, and that means paragraphs that are more than 2 sentences long. If your screen resolution is low, it may appear to be in a blob, but at high resolution it looks quite properly formatted to me. Further, I'm not at all sure that it is a "clean up taskforce" crisis, when what you're really looking for is a note dropped on the talk page of an active article being watched by its sole author. Geogre 14:11, 19 February 2006 (UTC)

Added to User:Kcordina/Desk RJFJR 00:31, 20 February 2006 (UTC)

Well, with the help of three other sets of eyes, I gather that the issue was that subsections were desired. Personally, I didn't think the article was long enough or the life clearcut enough for such a thing, but sections have now been made. Please communicate on the talk page. Otherwise, with no more input in another 24 hours, I will suppose the objections are satisfied. Very odd project proceedings, I must say. (Inactive pages being added to projects are great. Active pages, though, always have communication on the talk page without tags.) Geogre 03:27, 20 February 2006 (UTC)

I've had a look through and started tweaking things. The introduction was, I felt, a little long, so I have moved some of the content to an 'early life' section. I think the early musical and literary work section needs changing around a bit to get it into chronological order - it's very hard to follow at the moment. It starts off with saying something about his later-life, then jumps back to 1710. Geogre can you try and re-order the section so its follow his life through more clearly? Kcordina 09:23, 20 February 2006 (UTC)