Talk:Count of Beberrua

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This article was nominated for deletion on 20/7/2006. The result of the discussion was no consensus.

[edit] Cleanup

I really don't think that this article is appropiately written. It is certainly not encyclopedic in its style of writing and the "and finally" and "now let me discuss with you"... etc. have no place in a Wikipedia article. That's why I marked it for cleanup. I haven't re-added it at the moment though. Estel 18:21, Nov 25, 2004 (UTC)

It's things like:

And Finally!

Maltese titles, it seems, never become extinct! Unlike British Dukedoms, they seem to be virtually indestructible!! Don’t they just remind you of those old Hammer movies where Count Dracula is repeatedly restored to life despite stakes being driven through his heart, silver bullets, running water, fire etc?

So, folks,...Hey Presto! the title passes from a male to a female and then, yet again, to another female! Primogenial male-to-male line?!!

The excessive you of personal pronouns, talking in the familiar. Saying "hey presto" aren't 'encyclopedic'. Estel 12:54, Nov 26, 2004 (UTC)

Its got such an obscure theme that maybe cutting it to a couple of paras would be best and would cut cut out the POV stuff. Someone has an ax to grinds but I'm not clear what.Dejvid 28 June 2005 14:11 (UTC)

[edit] Reduction to a few paras

I have drastically reduced this article; repetition, POV, unsubstantiated material, the aforementioned excess of personal pronouns etc.. All of the original remains in the edit history and any or all can of course be reintroduced by concerned parties. But it would be nice to see the comments backed up with sources and the one-sidedness of the article taken away. Oh, and please, no more So, folks, or Hey Presto! Marcus22 20:56, 11 November 2005 (UTC)