Talk:Dassault Mirage 2000

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Three-view diagram of 'Mirage 2000' is actually of 1950s era Mirage III.

Good catch, I removed it from the article.--Sylvain Mielot 18:01, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

Here's a good site with info on history/background of the Mirage 2000 & 4000, and another site with more technical data. -- Adeptitus 17:44, 27 June 2006 (UTC)

Contents 1 There is way too less information abt this fighter 2 Copyediting 3 Requested move 3.1 Survey 3.1.1 Survey - Support votes 3.1.2 Survey - Oppose votes 3.2 Discussion 4 Mirage 2000 in Indian fiction

[edit] There is way too less information abt this fighter

This fighter is having far less technical information here. I can add some.

Good job & kudos to Ajay ijn! -- Adeptitus 18:06, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Copyediting

I took a rather quick pass through the article doing basic spelling and grammar clean-up, and made a few corrections. I'm sure I didn't catch it all, but at least it's a start. --Askari Mark | Talk 18:51, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

I had a pass through, all looks OK to me. I removed a whole bunch of broken links, mainly to names of specific weapons systems, radar pods, engines etc. If someone wants to go write all those articles, they can revert my edit, otherwise the whole thing was peppered with red. In terms of correct English, I'd say the "Copyedit" tag could be removed. I don't know if it comes into the same remit, but coming into the article as an interested layman, I found the long list of Mirage 2000 variants and exactly what brand and mark of radar they use/d to be quite boring. Would it be worth splitting off a "Mirage 2000 Variants" page if we want to keep all the information? It sort of kills the readability of the page at the moment.Brickie 17:25, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

Part of the problem is that the Variants section contains both the primary models as well as the "sales designations" of specific equipment configurations sold to various foreign customers. There is also too much use of bullet lists. Askari Mark | Talk 18:22, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

I'd better let someone more acquainted with the subject matter tackle that - my instinct would be to hive off a page of "Mirage 2000 variants" or some such, but I don't know whether that's policy or not. Brickie 11:35, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Mirage 2000 in Indian fiction

The Mirage 2000 has been featured in Indian military fiction. In the book Op Kartikeya the story centers around a Mirage 2000 fighter pilot.Sarkar2 01:59, 10 March 2007 (UTC)