Talk:Diane Choksondik
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I don't get it, how DOES she die? Just saying there was semen in her stomach doesn't tell us anything. --24.89.225.14 07:07, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
You know what I don't understand is this. "Ms. Choksondik had a sexual relationship with Mr. Mackey, the school counsellor. Ms. Choksondik also confessed to being a virgin to Mr. Mackey, and they had sexual intercourse." This is the exact quote from the article. Shouldn't it be rewritten to something like "Ms. Choksondik confessed to being a virgin to Mr. Mackey, the school counsellor, and they had sexual intercourse."? The original two lines don't make sense in the current form. If no one responds in a week, I'm changing it. Don't bother bitching if it gets changed. However, if someone has a better revision, suggest it.72.11.37.92 20:48, 10 February 2007 (UTC)