Talk:Doggcrapp training
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There is a NPOV problem here: "...Dante Trudell (who is a class act)..." Not only is the meaning of that parenthetical statement rather vague, it's also quite flagrantly nothing more than a statement of personal opinion indicating the author's regard for Trudell.
Additionally, the external reference links are of dubious relevance. The first is apparently supposed to link to a thread on a web discussion board, although it seems to redirect to the front page. In any case, a discussion board thread hardly seems to qualify as an authoritative citation.
The second link is worse - it simply points to an article on something that seems only loosely related to the topic. The sentence by which the footnote appears simply states that stretching increases muscle mass in birds. Precisely why this is relevant, or what type of validity it gives to this article as a citation of authenticity is unclear. Jupitermenace 18:02, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
