Talk:Don't Tell Me (Madonna song)

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Well I think there is nothing to clean up! It needs more information!

1. Please sign your comments on talk pages.
2. If you don't know why the cleanup template has been added, don't remove it. You could ask the person who added, or even assume that they know what they're doing. In this case, the main problem is that the article is written in a sort of fanzine/music journalism style rather than Wikipedia style; it should read like a neutral, factual encyclopædia article. There are also more straightforward problems with grammar, capitalisation, etc.
3. When I get a chance, if someone else hasn't done it first, I'll do the work; please leave the template there until then. --Mel Etitis (Μελ Ετητης) 17:17, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

Can you give an example of fanzine style? Also, what's wrong with music journalism style? Unless you mean formatting conventions. Hyacinth 04:31, 8 August 2006 (UTC)