Talk:Earth Alliance Civil War
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[edit] Organization?
So, I ran through the article and touched up and re-wrote various things. Mostly I just fixed the ship italicization (you italicize the ship's name, but not it's prefix, thus: EAS Lexington). I also elaborated on some spots that needed elaborating, and tried to rephrase some akward bits.
Anyhow, I think this should be broken up into different sections, either by milestones of the conflict (ie: Martial Law and Secession), or different relevant time periods. (ie: Mid 2260-2261, for the same section).
So, thoughts?--Raguleader 04:28, 14 December 2006 (UTC)
- Went ahead and broke it up into sections. I tried to break it up into major portions, rather than individual events (ie: B5's independence was itself directly related to Hague's Coup and the various acts of secession or protest on Mars and the other colonies). If anyone thinks it can be done better, please feel free to do so.--Raguleader 21:13, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
- Great going, I think it certainly looks better than it was before. Great job! Radagast83 04:00, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
- Hey, I think that's the first time I've gotten a pat on the back for a Wiki edit (especially for a B5 article... MAN some folks take this too personally...) Thanks! :*D --Raguleader 21:06, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
- Great going, I think it certainly looks better than it was before. Great job! Radagast83 04:00, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
