Talk:Economic discrimination

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[edit] Price Discrimination != Predujidical pricing

Mm..good catch. --Elaragirl^Talk|Count 17:02, 22 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Autopeer review to do

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Elaragirl^Talk|Count 05:14, 3 December 2006 (UTC)