Talk:Aftercare (BDSM)
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Tried to wikify.
Thought that the phrase in parenthesis (Never underestimate the importance of negotiating this closing ritual) should be better contextualised.
The article is mostly the explanation of the acronym which is very unlike an encyclopia entry and appears to be taken from another publication which is not properly cited.
In the text about a shibari weekend in Cincinnati, Ohio, an addendum written by a certain shevah was added about aftercare, in which the word AFTERCARE (Never underestimate the importance of negotiating this closing ritual) was explained as an acronym:
This sort of mention would be fine if it were accompanied by a reference as it is, it doesn't provide any reference.
The article requires refinement of it's tone as the content now reads like a how to change your life manual which was probably a good idea in the original context of the document, but needs redressing here.
--Dananimal 04:53, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
I've now removed this material from the article.
To the original poster of that material: please see the original research guidelines, verifiability guidelines and Wikipedia is not a how-to manual. However, your contribution is appreciated, even if we can't accept it, and I'd appreciate it if you could improve the article in other ways. -- The Anome 18:04, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
