Talk:Bermuda Syndrome
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[edit] A good start...
The article has a good start, but the writing is redundant. I recommend less use of pronouns, as this can easily improve the writing's style and tone. A bit more content could help too, but for the most part, the article is quite good. --Cremepuff222 (talk, review me!) 00:30, 15 March 2007 (UTC)