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Contents 1 News 2 Discussion of proper pronoun usage 3 Intersexed? 4 Grammar check 5 Inaccuracies v. redundancies 6 Opening paragraph not following MoS? 7 Rv. 8 Criminal History 9 Gender vs. Sex 10 Gender, sex, pronouns 11 Blanket revert 12 New citations 13 Expansion 14 Pronoun usage 15 Intentional misuse of pronouns 16 Adding references 17 Am I missing something? 18 Rebecca's news cites 19 "Girls Don't Cry" 20 Speaking of citations 21 Help with References 22 Tone 23 Carolyn Gage's essay 'Unmaking of a Lesbian' 24 Dropping random names 25 Did Brandon Teena date Lisa Lambert?

[edit] News

This info ran on th AP newswire today:

Mr. Teena’s killer, death-row inmate John Lotter, claims that another man convicted in the crime, Marvin T. Nissen, actually murdered Teena, 21, and two witnesses, Lisa Lambert, 24, and Philip DeVine, 22, on New Year's Eve 1993 at a farm house in Richardson County, Nebraska. Lotter's attorney, Jerry Soucie, asked the Nebraska Supreme Court to order DNA testing on gloves that Nissen wore the night of the killings. Richardson County District Judge Daniel Bryan denied a similar request at an earlier trial. Nissen has testified that he stabbed the young transgender man, but he said it was Lotter who shot Brandon Teena. Nissen traded testimony for a life sentence.

-Paige 20:16 9 Jun 2003 (UTC)

[edit] Discussion of proper pronoun usage

The article refers to Teena Brandon/Brandon Teena consistently as "he". Given that she/he was physically a woman, is this factually accurate? →Raul654 04:57, Feb 28, 2004 (UTC)

Genitals do not determine what pronouns you should use. Morwen 18:27, Mar 12, 2004 (UTC)

Usually they do. - XED.talk 14:50, 5 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Unless you insist on having a look into people's underwear before you decide whether you address them or speak about them as male or female, they do not. Gender identity and/or gender role determine that, not genitals. Brandon lived as a man, identified as a man, therefore the male pronoun is the only appropriate one, and using the female one is nothing but trans-bashing, not better than that of the people who raped and murdered him. -- AlexR 19:55, 5 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Brandon was biologically female. Mainstream news reports refer to her as her and she. Only GLBT advocacy websites refer to her as him. Wikipedia is not a GLBT advocacy website. I can say I'm a Martian but it doesn't make it so. If you really think calling her she is as bad as raping and murdering someone, then I think you really need to take some medication. If you accuse me of being no better than the people who raped and murdered her, you are not only being extremely offensive, but you are also trivialising her death for propaganda purposes. - XED.talk 10:11, 6 Feb 2005 (UTC)

This is not an issue of propaganda. It is a matter of respecting Brandon for the choices he has made and respecting his self-identification, and it is this respect to our subject matter that is reflected in Wikipedia guidelines and policy (See Wikipedia:Naming conventions (identity), Wikipedia:Style_guide#Identity).

Just because the "mainstream news" may use inaccurate and pronouns found offensive by the trans* community (coincidentally see the above cut from an AP article, which says "he stabbed the young transgender man"), doesn't mean Wikipedia should either. Dysprosia 14:10, 6 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I'm not interested in 'guidelines' which have been made up on the spot by propagandists. You may think calling a biological woman she is the same as raping and murdering someone - but I don't - XED.talk 16:03, 6 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I personally didn't say that, so don't try and muddy the waters here. Let us examine your weak argument that biology should determine pronouns instead.

• Say a man has had an accident and has had to have his genitals removed, but he still presents as a man and lives as a man - would you then use female pronouns for him?
• Say a man has had a chromosomal problem and has XX chromosomes instead of XY (this has happened), but still presents and lives as a man - would you then use female pronouns for him?
• Say a woman has had congenital adrenal hyperplasia and has excessive testosterone, but still presents and lives as a woman - would you then use male pronous for him?
• Say a baby is born intersexed. What pronouns would you use, based on that child's genitals?

To say that biology should strictly determine pronouns becomes a very hurtful insult for the first three people. If you present and live as a man, you would be insulted if I were to use female pronous to describe you, or vice versa. To say that biology should strictly determine pronouns becomes an impossible question to resolve for the fourth person.

However, observe the common thread between the first three people here. If we were to use male pronouns for the first two persons and female pronouns for the third, we are respecting their self-identification and we are respecting these people. Trans* people are not less deserving of respect, and thus we should respect their self-identification also. Dysprosia 23:25, 6 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Wikipedia’s guiding principle is the neutral point of view. Offensiveness to special interest groups is one of the most POV grounds to judge articles by. Susvolans (pigs can fly) 08:32, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)

You are mistaken. I had already outlined why using birth pronouns to describe transgender people is inaccurate in the above argument (which you have not spoken to at all in your response); the issue here is about basic respect of a person. Think about changing all the instances of "black" to "Negro" or "coloured" on an article about a black man, or pronouns for even a nontransgendered man to "she". Is that NPOV? Is that behaviour reflected in Wikipedia policy? Dysprosia 08:55, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)

In my view we should use he. Just like we refer to people by the name they themselves prefer (anyone remember Sollog?), so we should for pronouns. If this is going to cause confusion I wouldn't object to a clarifying note about this usage though. --fvw* 02:41, 2005 Feb 7 (UTC)

I don't think that should be necessary since the article is extremely clear about Brandon's gender identity and transgender status. Dysprosia 02:44, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)

It is necessary that Brandon Teena be described as a 'he', for that very reason. Brandon Teena's gender identity was a pre-operative male transsexual, a 'he'. His surgical, genital, therapeutic, or genetic status is irrelevant. Calling Teena by female pronouns will cause far more confusion than it will solve, both about Mr. Teena's gender identity, and the concept of gender identity in general. That would cause a negative effect greater than just a slight to Mr. Teena's memory - it would perpetuate misunderstanding, a primary no-no of the wikipedia. Just my 2¢. -- RyanFreisling @ 02:51, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Responding to the RfC: I agree that if he self-identified as male and lived as a man, he should be referred to as "he." SlimVirgin 02:56, Feb 7, 2005 (UTC)

We should refer to him as "he", no question.-gadfium 04:07, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)

The manual of style is clear on this: Brandon should be referred to as "he". This policy was hardly "made up on the spot" -- in its current form, it has been unchanged since April 7, 2004. --Carnildo 04:29, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Walks like a duck, talks like duck....Brandon Teena was male in looks, behavior and psychology. The only ones who say him as female while he was alive were his rapist/killers. The pronouns should stay masculine, unless Raul654, Xed, and Susvolans want to argue that the article should be renamed Teena Renae Brandon. BlankVerse 11:56, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I saw this on RfC. Given the dispute, wouldn't it be best to just use Brandon and avoid the pronouns?--Pharos 02:09, 9 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Opinions are as varied as people - but the fact is Brandon was a 'he'. It's not necessary to accomodate some people's 'moral' sensitivities re: gender to put them at ease in this article - it's necessary to be factual. And for the reasons above, Brandon Teena was a 'he' when he was brutally murdered. -- RyanFreisling @ 02:19, 9 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Call him a he, but use gender-neutral pronouns where necessary to avoid confusion. -Sean Curtin 04:59, Feb 12, 2005 (UTC)

English doesn't have any gender-neutral pronouns. "He" is masculine/indeterminate, "she" is feminine, and "it" is neuter/inanimate. --Carnildo 07:49, 12 Feb 2005 (UTC)

You ALWAYS refer to a transgendered person by the pronouns of their gender identity. This is not debatable. Sources that refer to Brandon as a female simply aren't familiar with, or just don't shive a git about, proper etiquette around these matters; some of these sources also refer to him as a lesbian, which is flat out wrong. Brandon identified as male, and therefore is properly referred to as male. Bearcat 08:18, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)

According to the manual of style, on Wikipedia (Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Identity), one should, "Where known, use terminology which subjects use for themselves (self identification). This can mean calling an individual the term they use, or calling a group the term most widely used by that group." Hyacinth 23:14, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

"Not debatable": the howl of the fanatic - XED.talk 03:26, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Tough beans. One still has to refer to a transgendered person by the pronouns of their gender identity, whether it's "fanaticism" or not. Bearcat 03:40, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)

The consensus arising from the RfC, plus existing Wikipedia policy, support the use of male pronouns. Stop reverting. Dysprosia 04:21, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I've never seen such confusion before. A man is a man; a woman is a woman. Self-identification and/or political theory is irrelevant. -Naif 11:42, 3 December 2005 (UTC)

My point exactly! Brandon Teena was a man, and was thus a man. Nothing is at all confused. :) Ambi 12:08, 3 December 2005 (UTC)

How on earth do any of us know anyone's gender? Do we demand to see their genitalia? Of course not. They tell us (either directly or indirectly), and polite, reasonable people do not need any more than that. If Brandon Teena says he is a man, and especially if he is consistant in that, there is nothing more to say about the matter. This is not "political theory" -- it is well-established and conventional practice. 38.2.108.125 21:50, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

According to Merriam-Webster, man is defined as: an individual human; especially : an adult male human, and male is defined as: an individual that produces small usually motile gametes (as spermatozoa or spermatozoids) which fertilize the eggs of a female. Woman is defined: an adult female person, and female as: of, relating to, or being the sex that bears young or produces eggs. She never produced any spermatozoa, and if she never had sexual reassignment surgery, as the article states, she produced eggs, and therefore the Merriam-Webster Dictionary would label her as a woman. I think in maintaining Wikipedia's neutral policy, a dictionary definition must be used whenever possible.

At least, can we have a "she" for rape? They raped Brandon Teena as a girl, not a man.--130.245.235.109 09:39, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

I don't know how to properly post to this page, however I think something very important is being overlooked in the pronoun usage... I came to this article from a different website that wasn't very clear on the Brandon Teena/Teena Brandon case. I just want to say to all those insisting on the male pronoun... how long do you think it took me to figure out whether or not this born-female person was actually born-female? A good five minutes of crawling the page! She was a woman, she wanted to be identified as a man. All respect to the person here, it's difficult to follow otherwise. Also, to the user that stated using the female pronoun being even remotely close to actually raping and killing of this 'person': way to go. No really, I've never seen a more ridiculous line of logic. I'd say that writing that in was about as bad as ordering a platoon of rifleman to gun down a family with 8 kids. Sarcasm, by the way.

[edit] Intersexed?

An intersexed friend tells me Brandon claimed to have genitals of both sexes, ie was intersexed. (In that case he was not so much "re-assigning" his gender as "assigning" it.) I don't have a more reliable report. Does anyone know?

I've never heard of it, so I'd like to see a reliable source before it went in the article. Ambi 10:24, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

Brandon did indeed call himself a "hermaphrodite" on certain occasions. Or at least this is according to not only the movie (Boys Don't Cry) but also the documentary (The Brandon Teena Story) and the book All She Wanted by Aphrodite Jones. -- WiccaIrish 16:52, 7 August 2006 (UTC)

Yes, but many trans people call themselves hermaphrodites when they are not intersexed. The male identity of Brandon is even questionable in many communities.

Hm.... perhaps we could put in that he claimed to be intersex, but not say that he WAS intersex...? Eirra 20:10, 13 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Grammar check

The grammar of the last 'rewrite' was pretty atrocious. Fixed. Discuss! -- RyanFreisling @ 23:36, 28 Mar 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Inaccuracies v. redundancies

The point is already made regarding the surgical status of Brandon Teena. Moreover, it is inaccurate to say "transgender, rather than transsexual". The definitions of transgender and transsexual are significantly vague enough to make the distinction in this context not only unimportant, but unwarranted. He may have been transgender, transsexual or both, but his surgical status was not the determinant. -- RyanFreisling @ 15:46, 29 Mar 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Opening paragraph not following MoS?

The opening paragraph does not follow the guidelines in Wikipedia:Manual of Style (biographies). Specifically, it doesn't list dates of birth and death immediately after the name. I was going to fix it, but then from this article's history, I see others have attempted to do the same thing, and the change has always been reverted without comment. May I ask why? I can't see anything in this discussion that leads to a special exception from the biography style for this article. --TreyHarris 21:27, 20 August 2005 (UTC)

Without browsing through the complete history, a lot of reverts were made because the pronouns were changed - from "he" to "she" is something that occasionally happens here. Same with - let's put it politely - less than respectfull comments. Those too get reverted on sight. Might be that the dates got reverted with them. So if it is just the dates you want to add, feel free. -- AlexR 23:57, 20 August 2005 (UTC)

I went and did this earlier today. Part of it was edited based on the bolding of Brandon's birth name. I can understand why that would be upsetting, as a transwoman myself I fully understand that it would suck to see my former name there and in bold. So, I definitely don't have an objection to Dysprosia's edit. I'm just wondering if it not being bolded in anyway violates a Wikipedia standard. Which was of course why the opening paragraph was changed initially. Taking for example the Gwen Araujo article, linked directly from this one, which bolds her male name. I guess I just need to figure out which way is more proper and standards directed? Or is there even a standard on this? -- Zoe 04:56, 9 October 2005 (UTC)

It shouldn't contradict standards, only synonyms of the article title should be in bold. Gwen's case is a little different, her mother apparently uses her birth name occasionally if I remember correctly, so there is less leeway to debold that; even so there is less use of Gwen's birth name these days, so given time it may be then more appropriate to debold. Dysprosia 05:02, 9 October 2005 (UTC)

I believe Gwen's mother actually filed for a post-mortem name change to prevent people from calling her by her birth name. Falsetto

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I'm putting an NPOV tag on this because the pronouns being used are reflective of a certain POV regarding transgendered people. Although the author obviously believes that self-identification of gender should be reflected in an objective identification of gender, this is not necessarily the case. Biologically, Brandon Teena was female. Whether gender should be considered wholly independent of sex, and whether gender is entirely a matter of social convention or self-idenfication (or conversely a matter of objective classification) are issues on which reasonable people could debate. However this article seems to assume that self-identification of gender should translate into objective terminology.

I think that the article should be corrected by using alternate pronouns ("he/she", "s/he", "him/her", etc.). I would have done so myself, but I thought the point should be discussed before taking unilateral action.

Sincerely,

Nicky Scarfo

The Wikipedia manual of style indicates the use of self-identification to be proper, so that's what should be here. (See: Wikipedia:Style_guide#Identity) - ZoeF 23:17, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

New talk goes to the bottom of the page, not the top. Dysprosia 01:03, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

Okey-doke, I was unaware of all that, but I must say that I disagree with the rule. It presumes self-identification automatically grants objective nomenclature. So if I became a famous writer (famous enough to have a Wikipedia article written about me), and I suddenly declare that I am Napoleon Bonaparte and have done everything Napoleon did, then the author has to refer to me as if I'm Napoleon for the rest of the article? Or if George Bush suddenly exclaims he is a black man, would the author have to write "In an effort to get in touch with his African-American roots, Bush watched 'Barbershop'"? This rule makes no sense-- it is dictated by the conventions of whoever wrote the rule but prematurely stamps out any debate on objective classification which may be in question. Effectively, it resolves a clearly unresolved issue regarding objective biological classification of gender vs. self-identification of gender. To say nothing of the idea of general idea gender as a social construct, which could be used to argue for either objective or self-idenitifcation. In short, this rule is complete bullshit and only reflects the bias of the person who wrote it.

Nicky Scarfo

Sorry, but declaring oneself to be Napoleon and declaring oneself to be of the male gender are not the same. Your argument, and not the rule, is bullshit. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 04:39, 21 March 2006 (UTC)

What Ryan said. The policy also allows us to respect the subject matter that we discuss, which is important for neutrality. This has been discussed countless times before and the policy still stands. Dysprosia 06:38, 21 March 2006 (UTC)

Ryan, declaring oneself to be Napoleon and declaring oneself to be of the male gender are NOT the same, you are correct, however, the rule, as currently written would make no distinction between them-- "Where known, use terminology that subjects use for themselves (self-identification). This can mean using the term an individual uses for himself/herself, or using the term a group most widely uses for itself. This includes referring to transgender individuals according to the name and pronoun they use to identify themselves." It is a blanket rule, which I suspect was written to cover this specific subject, and then extrapolated therefrom.

Furthermore, no one here has yet addressed the fact that the issue of whether self-identification of gender automatically translates into objective classification of gender is far from a settled manner. This rule settles the issue decidedly on one side of the debate, and therefore, is itself a violation of the neutrality principle. I know people here probably think I'm advocating AGAINST self-identification as the sole objective criteria of classification and identification of gender. This is not the case. Formally, I have no opinion on the matter. Furthermore, I believe society should be wholly inclusive of people regardless of sexual orientation or gender identification. That does not prevent me from thinking that the issue of whether the objective classification and nomenclature of gender is based solely on self-identification or not is a subject upon which rational people can disagree. I take no position on the matter other than to say I think a rule which presupposes an objective conclusion of an as-yet inconclusive matter is bullshit. I think the rule was not created in the interest of objective and neutral writing, but to satisfy the presuppositions and opinions of the rule's author(s).

--Nicky Scarfo

On the other hand, calling Brandon "she," or even using s/he throughout, as was suggested above, would also be promoting a particular point of view, arguably ones that are more biased. Exploding Boy 07:09, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

Very true, Exploding Boy. However, I believe use of s/he throughout would be the least of the three evils, as it promotes an ambivalent, rather than determinate, point of view on a subject which is indeterminate.

On another point, I just wanted to say that I recently read the excellent Wikipedia articles regarding transgender and transexuality. The articles are good because they treat the issue with the complexity, depth and neutral POV that these subjects deserve. Which makes this simplistic and biased rule that equates self-identity with objective classification all the more frustrating.

--Nicky Scarfo

"S/he" is used to describe unknowns. Brandon Teena is not an unknown, and to use "s/he" to refer to a person whose gender identity is clearly known is no better in my opinion than referring to him as an "it," which is blatantly offensive. Furthermore, there is absolutely no way to avoid bias in anything we write. To call him a "he" is biased toward transgender advocacy groups, whereas "she," "it," and "s/he" are biased toward people who deny a transsexual's right to self-identify. Falsetto

The fact that we have a self-identification policy implies a sense of objectivity, since Wikipedia does not itself take a point of view in choosing pronouns for its subjects, but instead chooses pronouns that reflects the pronouns that the subjects choose for themselves. Dysprosia 11:55, 26 March 2006 (UTC)

It is also culturally appropriate to refer to someone by the gender they lived by since English speakers use the pronoun that the person appears to warrant, not from the gender they actually are. If I see someone who looks like a man, I refer to that person as him. If they then tell me, "No, I'm female," I feel embarassed and I use she. If they never say anything about it, I go one using he because there's really no reason not to. On another note, we refer to Brandon as Brandon, rather than Teena, because that's the name he used. It is similar to how Mark Twain's article and talk page makes mention of his birth name but does not make a point of calling him by it throughout the article. - Kuzain 19:07, 29 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Rv.

Please, don`t revert our version. It is a new category and the old will be delete. Thanks. --Barnaul 12:59, 31 August 2006 (UTC)

Do you mean the "Hate Crimes" category or the "American Children" one? If the latter, Brandon doesn't qualify. -- Susan Davis 23:18, 31 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Criminal History

I'm going to add mention that she/he had an extensive criminal record, since the article is not labled "The Brandon Teena Murder". I just need to find proper sources. I'm quite sick of this person being made to be some kind of martyr, when she/he had quite a questionable background.Nanaharas 05:08, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

So if somebody has a criminal past, that somehow negates or lessens the impact of being killed for reasons which had nothing to do with criminality? I'd advise you to be careful in how you phrase any additions relating to his criminal record. Not because I'm trying to whitewash him or anything; if the material is verifiable and NPOV then that won't be a problem. But if you try to portray it as though his criminal record somehow mitigates the circumstances of his death, then the material will have to be reviewed or excluded on neutrality grounds. Bearcat 16:12, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

I agree Bearcat, sorry I was a tad hostile in my initial statement. If I post anything it will state that she had criminal record and what her record was. I think we all know from various sources the things she did, I'd just like to take a little more time and hopefully actually get a source to her actual criminal record. I believe I've read that she forged a check/checks in the group of people she was hanging around that included her murderers. She was also known to be manipulative. That is as relevant to her murder as much as the 'hate crime' aspect. She pushed the wrong buttons in other words. I'm open to suggestions on how I can state that, IF it proves true after research, in a NPOV way. I'm pretty sure the facts show that she was not a 'babe in the woods', and at the very least her manipulative nature was a factor in the tragic events that followed. To exclude this information makes an article about Brandon Teena incomplete.

I'll post whatever I'd like to add here before I change the article. I'm new to joining the editing process at WIKI, so any tips on how to include links and things like that would be helpful.

PS: I call Brandon she in discussion because I feel that's the proper way to refer to her. Any criminal records/convictions will also list her actual gender. I will however respect the format of the article and use male pronoun if I contribute to the article. Nanaharas 17:40, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

How do you plan to source "She was also known to be manipulative"? It seems like something too subjective to be encyclopedic. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 10:57, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

I never said I was going to use those words. However, passing oneself off as a guy without informing others, especially a desired girlfriend, is in itself manipulative by definition. So if I do say that, do I need to cite the dictionary?

No matter...I am taking some time on this one to make sure whatever I add is correct. I am looking around Wiki to see what people cite as sources. That's no help because it varies from page to page what is allowed and what isn't.Nanaharas 00:03, 2 November 2006 (UTC)

See the various discussions on BT's gender status, and the article Transgender for some more information on why "passing oneself off as a guy" might not be an accurate preception of Brandon Teena's intentions. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 10:10, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

I am quite aware of the argument. However, the fact that she identified as a male and did not tell others she was a biological female identifying as a male is manipulative in context to the fact that she was forging relationships with these people.

I'm finding out quite a lot. This was NOT a hate crime even tho it is thought of as one for instance. I AM going to change this article when I feel I have enough sources. If folks wanna wage war over truth, so be it, I'm game. Or you can just let the truth be what it is. Nanaharas 23:38, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

Yeah. It's manipulative like not coming out as gay to every single person you meet, regardless of the potential consequences, is manipulative. *eyeroll* Bearcat 23:56, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

Roll your eyes all you want Bearcat, your bias towards Brandon is now clear. This is not a matter of coming out to "every single person you meet". The deception and manipulation became factors,again by definition, when Brandon entered intimate relationships and did not reveal the entire truth. As I pointed out, that ultimately was the catalyst that ended in the death of three people. Even if she hadn't been so unfortunate as to meet up with scum like her rapist and killers, that deception would still most likely have led to someone being hurt emotionally. I suppose in your rolling eyes Brandon's disrespect to others is 'OK', but how dare anyone call her a she, eh?

BTW, I have evidence of her manipulative past.I'm not going to write the article in a mean spirited way as I must seem here, but she seems at this stage of my investigation to have been pretty nonchalant in her many social transgressions.Nanaharas 15:40, 22 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Gender vs. Sex

Granted, I haven't thoroughly read every single comment on this page regarding the pronoun usage, but I did notice one glaring problem: the confusion of gender and sex. Sex is the biological traits of a person, including primary (present at birth, ie, genitals) and secondary (those developed later, such as facial/body hair, breasts) sex characteristics. Gender is the socially created expectations based upon these characteristics. This is the standard difference between the two, taught regardless of GLBTQIA feelings. I learned this in a biology class (high school) and a sociology class (college), so that shows it is more than one field's view. In the instance of transgender people, and in this case, Mr. Teena specifically, one may be a female in sex, but male in gender (or vice versa, obviously). Gender is about how an individual perceives him/herself and how s/he wishes others to perceive him/her. Mr. Teena identified as a man, and while he may not have been male at the time of his death, his gender was decidedly open and he should therefore be referred to using masculine pronouns. Pronouns are a socially-defined concept, and since gender is a social and not a biological concept, one's gender defines (or at least should, when used properly) which pronouns are used. As history and cultural differences have shown, the outward signs of male or female drastically change, and are indications that outward appearance is not a reliable indicator of gender or sex. Ecurran 03:26, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

I certainly agree, but not everyone else does. Beyond the specific point of referring to the article subject 1) as Brandon Teena rather than Teena Brandon and 2) using male and not female pronouns, some editors don't accept that the sex and gender of one person can be different from each other. Using that approach, BT's physical sex would determine the use of the female pronoun. Name use is less contentious, I suppose, because I haven't seen anyone arguing to move Muhammad Ali to Cassius Clay. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 10:07, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

Brandon was decidedly NOT open about her "identification". For those who haven't paid attention, that fact was the catalyst to the entire chain of events that led to her downfall. That can be verified by court records alone. Teena was dishonest about her "identity", that is NOT being "open". I'm beginning to think any rational rewrite of this article is going to meet with failure no matter what I source. People seem to want to remain blind to many truths regarding this person.Nanaharas 23:46, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

"Identity" and "identification" are determined by what's between one's ears, not by what's between their thighs. Bearcat 23:52, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I may have been unclear; I meant that Mr. Teena was open as a male, as in, he portrayed himself as a male. I did not mean to imply anything about allegedly deceiving people in regards to the status of his genitals. That, I don't blame him for not being "open" about. I don't inform people about the status of mine, but I portray myself as female, and therefore am "open" about it. Ecurran 08:38, 22 November 2006 (UTC)

No, no, your point was clear. Nanaharas was disagreeing with it, and I in turn was disagreeing with Nanaharas. Bearcat 16:54, 22 November 2006 (UTC)

Using the male pronoun might imply a bias in favor of the transgender movement/identification, but using the female pronoun certainly implies a bias against it -- a unilateral ruling that Brandon Teena's self-identification as a man trapped in a female body is immaterial.

As a side-note, I'm inclined to take your comments about BT being the "catalyst" to his own "downfall" as victim-blaming. You can rant all you like about BT's femininity being "fact" as you're, of course, entitled to your own opinion, and you can choose to refer to BT by the female pronoun, or by the birth name, or as "Ms. Brandon" or whatever you please. You can also go argue against the policy of self-identification terminology (wherever it is; I've lost the link). But you can't edit this article against policy. It will be reverted.

For the record, I'm responding to Nanaharas here because I think this discussion belongs better under the "Gender vs. Sex" header. As far as I'm concerned, until the self-identification policy changes this debate is over. I'm not in the business of arguing against transphobia; it's bad for my health. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 12:04, 23 November 2006 (UTC)

LEAHAZEL: You can "be inclined" to take a fact as whatever you like. However it IS a fact that the initial crime was a direct result of Brandon's deception. It's in the court record, and witnesses verify it. Verifiable truth. It does NOT imply blame unless you're closeminded. It simply is what it is. It is not "victim blaming", because I will not say that the crime itself was excusable in any way. Brandon had no way of predicting reaction. However any reasonable person should know that there are often consequences to deceiving others. She lied to the wrong people unfortunately.

I already indicated that I will not refer to Brandon as a she in the article(see my initial post 'Criminal History'). As long as the facts are verifiable, there will be no cause to revert. I do intend to point out the fact that she did not tell many people she was intimate with of her biological nature, because it is relevant to her history of deception. I will save everything and revert back if someone who can't handle truth reverts it just because of what they "percieve". When I edit the article it will comply with all rules. For the record, I'm not suffering from transphobia. I'm not a bigot. I'm rewriting this to tell a more complete version of Brandon Teena's story. I can't help it if someone has 'truth-phobia'.Nanaharas 20:52, 23 November 2006 (UTC)

RE:Ecurran: Regarding your perception and updated POV regarding 'open';Just because Brandon dressed and acted as a male does not mean she was 'open'. She was still 'in the closet' by common definition. Being 'open' would be known as 'out of the closet' or 'coming out'. If you don't inform people of your status you are not 'open'. This is not a discussion board , other than what may directly affect the article, so I'm not gonna say anymore regarding my or other folks POV about that.Transgender itself is open to a wide variey of interpretations as the article says. It's a fine line regarding POV.

The correct way to refer to Brandon in article form has already been pointed out in an above section. I don't like having to write the article calling her a he, but that is the rule. Nanaharas 04:15, 24 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Gender, sex, pronouns

The emotional arguments as to pronoun usage above are understandable, but unsupported. Sex is a biological condition determined at the chromosomal (molecular) level. Briefly put, in humans (intersex variations aside) this means an xx karyotype for a female, xy for a male. Gender describes the physiological characteristics which identify (or distinguish) an organism's reproductive role. None of this is self-selected, though gender can be disguised through grooming, dress, hormone ingestion and under the knife. Brandon Teena was a female, although she attempted to self identify as a male (and presumably had every right to do this so long as she didn't gain unfair advantage through fraud or misrepresentation). In strictly cultural terms there is little argument against Brandon superficially self-identifying as a "he," but in objective, encyclopedic terms, she was a she. Even after so-called "trans-gender" surgery, she still would have been a biological female. However, given WP policy which stresses editorial consensus and (helpfully) strongly discourages edit warring, there's no reason to waste time asserting the notion she should be referred to as such in the article. As for her being a lesbian, as a female attracted exclusively to other females, Brandon was a lesbian who affected superficial male grooming and dress but retained observably female characteristics. How she chose to express her lesbianism is irrelevent (and again, her right). Her murder was a horrific crime and a tragedy. Never mind her criminal record, never mind how she misled some of the people who cared about her. She was given little chance (or time) to find happiness in her own way. Gwen Gale 20:39, 5 December 2006 (UTC)

I changed one of the pronouns to she, where it was necessary.--130.245.235.109 09:31, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

(snip out my post which was objected to) Gwen Gale 09:40, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

And your addition of that 'Lesbian Avengers' comment is intended to be constructive how? Seems completely inappropriate to me to use such terms (a personal attack) when you know nothing about the editors you're attacking. Your case for female pronouns has been demonstrated to be flawed and in defiance of policy. That's the extent of it. The sexuality of your fellow editors isn't the issue, so don't make it the issue. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 18:02, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

It was meant as a total compliment and a gesture of respect. However I have zero wish to nettle anyone about this. I think you've expressed your concern in good faith. To show my good faith in return, even if we disagree on something about this article, I have retracted my entire post. Thanks for expressing your concern and please let me know if there is anything else I can do. Gwen Gale 18:19, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

You didn't have to delete it (it makes the thread all-but-incomprehensible) but thanks for your good faith. Overall, we just need to avoid speculations about the sexuality of other editors. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 18:21, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

Cool. Gwen Gale 18:28, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

Anyway I don't agree with the pronoun usage in this article, I believe it's flawed but have no wish to go on about it. Thanks. :) Gwen Gale 03:31, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Blanket revert

Given the blanket revert, I've added the following tags:

NPoV - there is evidence this article is biased, largely by omitting context and background and using PoV terminology to describe the murder victim.

Factual dispute - Many facts are missing and/or incorrect.

Citations - The extensive use of psychological jargon must be supported by citations from published, verifiable and reliable secondary sources which use this vocabulary to describe Brandon.

Cleanup - The writing style and presentation is not encyclopedic, but polemic, with weak syntax. Gwen Gale 06:16, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

You are hereby invited to stuff it. Your edits to the article were tendentious and non-consensual, and not one bit better sourced than what you're claiming to expect now. The revert was legitimate. The article does not make extensive use of psychological jargon or use inappropriately POV terminologies, and if facts are missing or incorrect, the appropriate response is to propose them for discussion on the talk page, not to tag an article as problematic just because somebody else hasn't already added them. Tags are not to be used simply to gain the upper hand in a revert war. I'm a Wikipedia administrator, and this foolishness stops now. Bearcat 08:01, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

1. WP:CIVIL.

2. Gwen Gale, if what really bothers you about the article is that there aren't individual references tagged to each sentence, leading to sources confirming it, you can ammend that by using the existing external links section to add a detailed references section to the article. Adding {{fact}} after every contentious sentence isn't helpful, because it makes it look like there's no backing whatsoever for Brandon Teena's self-identification as a transman, when that fact appears in almost every account of the murder, at least every account I've seen.

If you think certain sentences can be better-structured grammatically, by all means, attempt to rephrase them (preferably all in a single large edit), and add a footnote reference as suggested in the Wikipedia style manuals. A good-faith edit utilizing existing sources listed in the article (or adding new ones like this crimelibrary.com article) would improve this article much more than tagging. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 09:36, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

I didn't see many hints of good faith in the blanket revert. If the assertions in the article are supportable, then please support them individually with acceptable citations from major news sources or peer reviewed, scholarly publications. Moreover, crimelibrary is a marginal, error-ridden source, especially for controversial or disputed content. Gwen Gale 17:47, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

I reverted you again. Adding 13 individual fact tags, plus POV, citations missing, factual dispute, and clean up tags to an article of some 300 words is vandalistic and ridiculous. It is trollish to claim that we need fact tags for statements that no reasonable person would contest. Furthermore, please look at this sentence and where you added the fact tag: "Laux was criticised after the murder for his lack of action and his attitude toward Brandon — at one point Laux referred to Brandon as "it" (see Trial details link)[citation needed]" That does not need a citation, it has one already. It just needs to be formatted properly. In fact, I think if you bothered to review the external links, you'd find the information in this article is supported by the links we already have. Your behaviour is disruptive. Please stop. Now. Sarah Ewart 21:51, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

Please stop your disruptive reverts. Please stop calling legitimate requests for enyclopedic citations "vandalism." The article is riddled with errors of fact and ommission, never mind the polemics. You can call my reaction ridiculous or whatever, you say the article has citations but it has zero citations, you say it's a format issue, so work on that too. Moreover I've looked at the external links and they don't seem verifiable. As is, the article has deep PoV and verifiability issues, so please stop being argumentative. If the material is supportable, provide the citations in the article in proper format, thanks. Gwen Gale 03:20, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Erm, meanwhile Sarah you're editing only by revert and attrition and the article's narrative details remain misleadingly abridged, its characterizations remain wholly unsupported and and its tone and drift, polemic. Gwen Gale 06:04, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] New citations

It's wonderful to see these. The article still needs a citation supporting a description of Brandon as a "transgendered man" (especially since the article itself says there was no surgery or other medical procedure attempted along that line) and moreover, the assertion "there was no compelling evidence that" Brandon was a lesbian also needs support. Gwen Gale 20:12, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Both cites support that Mr. Teena was a transgendered/transsexual person. One need not have surgery to be a transsexual (please familiarize yourself with the terms), in any case that ship (Mr. Teena confirmed as ts/tg) has sailed. I've corrected your improper name usage and your last point requires you to provide proof, not the proof of a negative. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 20:16, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

First, please do not alter my comments on this page. Second, please provide a citation which supports the description of a pre-operative biological female transexual as a "transgendered man". Thanks. Gwen Gale 20:30, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

If you willingly and consistently use incorrect pronouns (and therefore disrupt Wikipedia) to prove your point, you may find yourself being criticized for that behavior. Please stop intentionally disrupting this article's talk page by doing so. Edits reapplied. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 20:36, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

I'm not being disruptive, I'm asking for citations. I mean, if your assertion is so self-evident, supporting it should be easy, right? Gwen Gale 20:47, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Transgender status is not defined by whether the surgery has already taken place or not. It's defined by the person's internal gender identity, regardless of how far they are or aren't along in the process of actually undergoing surgical sex reassignment. Bearcat 20:32, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Please support your assertion with a citation from a peer reviewed scholarly journal, thanks. Gwen Gale 20:40, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Expansion

This article is lacking in context and background regarding Brandon's life. For example, there is nothing about her rejection by the military, nor her arrest for check forgery, the publicising of which led directly to her so called "friends" learning she wasn't a boy raping then subsequently murdering her and two others. The article also gives not a hint that she was in the habit of carefully witholding that information from people (including the females she dated). Gwen Gale 20:10, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Feel free to write an NPOV treatment f those points and I'm sure the article will be improved as a result. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 20:18, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Pronoun usage

This article requires support of a consensus use of a male personal pronoun to describe Brandon by including acceptable citations of multiple major news stories, articles from peer reviewed scholarly journals and other published works, thanks. As far as I can recall, everything I've ever read on this topic (aside from the Wikipedia article) refers to Brandon as a "she." Gwen Gale 20:27, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Using the male pronoun for an FTM transgender person is the correct usage. It does not require a source to support it. That other media sources have disregarded correct usage is not a legitimate reason for us to do the same. Bearcat 20:30, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Please do not change my comments. Please provide citations supporting your assertion that this is the correct usage, thanks. Gwen Gale 20:31, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Transgender people are correctly referred to by the pronouns of their gender identity. Even if you dispute that (and it's not your decision to make), Wikipedia policy explicitly states that we refer to people by their terminologies for themselves, which makes pronoun usage an non-debatable issue here. Bearcat 20:34, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

That applies to usernames. So far as the article content goes, please don't dispute, provide citations, thanks. (In this case we need citations supporting a consensus in the published literature for male personal pronouns to describe pre-operative biological females who self-indentify as transgender) Gwen Gale 20:38, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

No, it does not only apply to usernames: it applies to things like referring to Susan Aglukark as "Eskimo" rather than Inuit, referring to Greg Louganis as an "AIDS victim" rather than a person with AIDS, or referring to Brandon Teena with female pronouns. Transgender status is defined by the existence of a difference between one's biological sex and their gender identity, not by whether they've completed the process of surgical reassignment. And transgender people are referred to by the pronouns of their gender identity. This does not require sources; it's the only correct usage for transgender people — that some mainstream media don't understand that doesn't make it any less true, and it doesn't constitute a valid reason for Wikipedia to disregard correct usage. Bearcat 20:49, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

IMHO you're conflating usage examples as a rhetorical device. Please support your assertion that it is appropriate to use male personal pronouns to describe pre-operative biological females who self-indentify as transgender. Also, would you please support your assertion that Wikipedia policy requires such usage in articles (this would be regardless of the corresponding usage by the news media and peer reviewed publications)? Gwen Gale 20:58, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

'conflating usage examples as a rhetorical device'? Please. WP policy is clear. Your predisposition that Mr. Teena should be referred to as female does not entitle you to ignore clear precedent. He was a 'he' in all the ways that WP requires to use that pronoun. I don't expect you to leave it alone, but what on God's green earth are you gaining from this bizarre escapade, anyway? -- User:RyanFreisling @ 20:56, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Instead of throwing around insults and sarcasm, might I suggest you support your assertions with acceptable citations from secondary sources? Thank you. Gwen Gale 20:58, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Please support your assertion that transgender people can or should be referred to as "pre-operative biological females who self-indentify as transgender". (Oh, and learn to spell "identify".) Bearcat 21:02, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

I haven't tried to include that statement in the article. Meanwhile, you still haven't provided the citations supporting article content, which I've requested repeatedly. Gwen Gale 21:14, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Oh, you can ask for it until the cows come home for all I care. Referring to a transgender person by the pronouns of their gender identity is not a usage that requires outside sourcing, and as a result nobody has any obligation to accede to your request that the usage be sourced. Bearcat 21:54, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Gwen, the source you're looking for is Wikipedia:Naming conventions (identity). There's no point in looking for an outside source because the English language has no central authority, no universally agreed-upon rule book to check. In the absence of such an authority, we have to play by the rules of the system we're in, in this case Wikipedia. We're here on their dime. When in Rome, we have to do as Rome does -- and if a rule is wrong, then our argument is with the rule, not with its enforcers.

Conversely... Bearcat, don't you think that rule is a little hard to find? I was curious about the pronoun use here too, so I checked some of the natural places like Transgender and List of transgender-related topics, but they said nothing about it. I had to find that link on a talk page. I can see not addressing pronoun usage here, but surely it should be addressed in the main Transgender article at least. ~ CZeke 01:08, 12 December 2006 (UTC)

This isn't the first time this argument was held. Now that you mention it, I can see that the self-identification rule was cited and linked explicitly in several past discussions, but apparently not in this one. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 14:31, 12 December 2006 (UTC)

Wikipedia cannot ever be cited as a source for articles. What I respectfully believe is needed here is appropriate support from: a) scholarly, peer reviewed journals and/or b) evidence that this usage is widely evident or supported in news coverage and editorial discussion of this topic in secondary sources. As an aside, this editor has zero issue with, in principle, Brandon Teena or any other female self-identifying as a male. What I would like to establish is whether this hopefully objective, ostensibly encyclopedic and NPoV article about Brandon Teena can cite meaningful support for the casual use of these pronouns when referring to a biological female who, moreover, had undergone zero medical treatment for gender-re-assignment before being tragically and horrifically raped and then murdered (along with two others). Gwen Gale 16:27, 12 December 2006 (UTC)

For one thing, Wikipedia usage rules and conventions most certainly can be cited in a usage dispute. For another, appealing to mainstream media usage is problematic in cases where mainstream media usage can be wrong — it's not about whether the usage is common; it's about the fact that the usage is correct. A transgender person is not any less transgender just because they haven't had sex reassignment surgery yet — transgender status is defined by the existence of a disparity between a person's birth sex and their internal gender identity, regardless of how far along in the process they are. There simply isn't an issue to be had here, unless one completely ignores Wikipedia's policies of NPOV, naming conventions and respect for the article topics. You simply can't get to the position that the pronoun usage is even a matter of debate unless you start from the notion that either transgender is fundamentally an invalid identity in the first place, or Brandon Teena himself was lying about it. And either one of those is an unacceptably biased position to take in a neutral analysis of the topic. Bearcat 20:16, 12 December 2006 (UTC)

I don't see anyone arguing that WP is to be used as a source. And the policy (not source, policy) on proper use of pronouns is based on self-identification, not medical treatment. Scholarly, peer-reviewed journals are not required to determine proper pronoun usage. If peer-reviewed journals can help to improve the article then bring them on - but the pronoun usage will be unaffected. It's policy and it's proper. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 19:50, 12 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Intentional misuse of pronouns

Is disruptive in the context of this article. 'Gwen Gale', I'll ask you again to act respectfully (although you have reverted back your incorrect usage twice). -- User:RyanFreisling @ 20:48, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

What incorrect usage are you referring to? Gwen Gale 20:49, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Adding references

I have worked very hard to create a well-formed references section in this article, and populate it with detailed citations from various sources as to the crimes commited, Brandon Teena's self-identification etc. Please do not revert my edit wholesale, as it took me a long time to compile. If there is an issue with one or more of the sources I provided, please raise it to discussion on the talk page, and contrast with a source that refutes it, or else a more reliable replacement.

I could not find a citation for the basing of the song Girls Don't Cry on Brandon Teena, and PSBs' website is flash-oriented, so I didn't even bother looking there because it can't be direct-linked. If anyone can find a link to an interview with them that explains the song's origins, that would be very helpful.

Also, I rephrased the following sentence, because I felt it was awkwardly worded and possibly weasel worded:

"As with many other female-bodied persons who live as men, it has occasionally been claimed that Brandon was a lesbian. However, there was no compelling evidence that this was true in Brandon's case."

LeaHazel : talk : contribs 20:51, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Thanks LeaHazel. The change, supported by the cite you provided, seems helpful to me. Gwen Gale 20:56, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

You wouldn't have had to revise your talkpost if you'd read the article -- or my talkpost -- to begin with. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 21:06, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I'd grown so accustomed to being blanket reverted and lectured. You'll note that I did indeed read the article and revise my post, but I guess you had to take a cheap swipe at me anyway, huh? Meanwhile, I'd appreciate it if you would resore the citation request for support of the term "transgendered man" which you removed without notice, thanks. Gwen Gale 21:11, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Am I missing something?

Noticing the recent flurry of activity on the article, I still don't see any scholarly citations supporting the use of pronouns reflected in this article. I recognize that some editors who are watching this page have very strong opinions about the appropriate gender of pronouns to implement here but opinions alone, no matter how strongly asserted, are nothing more than original research, which according to WP policy is not acceptable for article content. Moreover, WP policy regarding self-identification seems strictly limited to the user space. Am I missing seeing the citations which support this usage? I need help here: Since I am unaware of any shred of evidence that there is scholarly, peer-reviewed support for this usage, please accept this as a respectful request for acceptable citations (even from DSM) which would support the use of applying male pronouns to the murder victim described in this article. Thank you. Gwen Gale 06:42, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

{{POV-check}}

It seems there are differing opinions of the proper pronoun for Brandon Teena. Though these are opinions (and therefore objective), many of the people on the talk page continually consider themselves to be absolutely accurate. According to the "ethical" definition, Brandon Teena should be called a man and therefore referred to as a "he" but according to the "scientific" definition of a man Teena should be referred to as a she, especially considering Brandon Teena does not match any of the qualifications (which would make the gender ambiguous) specified by Dysprosia (and therefore has no medical defintion as a man). I'm not supportive of either side of the debate; I merely care about the encyclopedic nature of Wikipedia that is clearly not being met here. Wikipedia is not here to discuss "feelings" and while it may be socially and morally unacceptable to address a transgendered person as anything other than what they wish to be adressed as, it is still necessary to remain entirely objective, and feelings are certainly difficult to objectively discuss.(71.234.63.192 22:27, 5 January 2007 (UTC))

Opinions are subjective, not objective. Thankfully, we have the WP Manual of Style which is very clear:

"Where known, use terminology that subjects use for themselves (self-identification). This can mean using the term an individual uses for himself or herself, or using the term a group most widely uses for itself. This includes referring to transgender individuals according to the names and pronouns they use to identify themselves." [1] (emphasis mine)

This is an old and haggard topic. Gwen, you're not getting anywhere with your talk of original research. Identifying transgender individuals by their chosen pronoun is policy, as the WP Manual of Style makes abundantly clear. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 22:36, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

If it's WP policy then, it appears to be otherwise wholly unsupported and in conclict with other WP policy against OR, since I'm unaware of any scholarly or peer-reviewed citations which could support the use of personal pronouns asserted in this article.

Meanwhile, could you please provide a scholarly source which confirms the murder victim self-identified with male personal pronouns? Gwen Gale 06:10, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

If someday that becomes the requirement, I'll consider devoting a moment to your request. In the meantime, WP policy is clear and OR is clearly not the issue. Feel free to bring your opinion that the two policies conflict to the appropriate policy pages - because the article on a murdered transsexual isn't the forum. Good luck in your efforts to resolve what you see as a policy conflict on the appropriate policy pages (I'd start with the Style and OR pages), but be aware that your views may be likely to be seen by others as a smokescreen for transphobia and you should make a concerted effort to address those potential concerns if your goal is to improve, and not to disrupt, Wikipedia. Good day to you. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 06:18, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

That's not what I asked. Please provide a scholarly source which confirms the murder victim self-identified with male personal pronouns. Thank you. Gwen Gale 06:25, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Not required. She changed her name when she began identifying as male. From the BBC, for example: "But Brandon's mother JoAnn is campaigning for justice for her child, who was born Teena Brandon but flipped her names when she started living as a boy." Good night. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 06:27, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

With all due respect, I believe you're mistaken. This extraordinary use of male personal pronouns requires documented support. Please provide a scholarly source which confirms the murder victim self-identified with male personal pronouns.

Your kind warning that I might be opening myself up to accusations of transphopia is appreciated as well-meant but ultimately, I think it's unhelpful. Moreover, it's serious a violation of WP policy to speculate on my motives. Hence, I respectfully ask you to refrain from making such references and comments in your edits here, thanks. Meanwhile, I'm aware you seem to be extremely sensitive about this topic. No worries, I wholly respect your PoV. I mean, all the way. My only care is the encyclopedic content and tone of the article. Gwen Gale 06:36, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

' This extraordinary use of male personal pronouns requires documented support.'? That support has been provided to you on multiple occasions. I did not speculate on your motives (you just commented on my 'sensitivity', which is rather uncivil. Your argument is sputtering, and even within one post is self-contradictory. Again, go fight your policy battle in the right forum and don't use the page of a murdered transsexual to explore your concerns about contradictory policy with contradictory arguments. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 06:39, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

The support provided in the past was from highly specialized advocacy sites. I'm not fighting WP policy at all. Please stick to the topic. I'm asking for a scholarly citation supporting the article's implicit assertion that Brandon Teena self-identified with male personal pronouns. Gwen Gale 06:49, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Even if what Ryan said was wrong, this is a biographical article, and a "scholarly citation" is not required to prove an issues of fact - something such as a newspaper article will do just fine. Brandon Teena was very widely referred to as "he" in the press at that time, because, like Wikipedia, the vast majority of the reputable press has similar points in their manuals of style. Thus we do similarly. Rebecca 06:55, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Did I say something wrong? Let me know and I'll be sure to learn from my error. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 07:11, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

All I've seen here have been references on advocacy sites. Could you please point me to some newspaper or wire articles which support your statement Brandon Teena was very widely referred to as "he" in the press at that time. I would also appreciate seeing a few citations supporting your assertion that like Wikipedia, the vast majority of the reputable press has similar points in their manuals of style. Thanks. Gwen Gale 07:01, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

'Self-identification' is the standard on Wikipedia, not 'scholarly and specific proof an individual used certain specific pronouns'. Personally I find it incredible that you can accept that Brandon Teena used a male name and identified as male and DIDN'T use male pronouns. I think you'd need to prove your POV, not demand speciifc scholarly proof about the specific question of pronoun usage. -- 07:11, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Please stop trying to deflect this discussion away from the requested citaions which so far, don't seem to be forthcoming. Only for clarity, I'll repeat my request. I would like citations (for the first they don't even have to be scholarly, multiple mainstream press and wire publications will do) supporting the following two assertions:

• Brandon Teena was very widely referred to as "he" in the press at that time
• like Wikipedia, the vast majority of the reputable press has similar points in their manuals of style

Thanks again... and cheers! Gwen Gale 07:32, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Not gonna happen, least not from me. Citations for those assertions (what the press does) are not required to validate the current policy of using a transgendered person's self-identification as the deciding factor regarding pronouns. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 07:36, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Following that, I take it you reject Rebecca's use of the press as a posible means of support for the use of these pronouns? Likewise her assertion that the manuals of style used by these organizations would support this use? I mean, I want to confirm my take on your input, that the only support you're asserting here is Wikipedia policy regarding self-identification? Thanks for your patience btw. Gwen Gale 07:42, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Rebecca's opinions are her own. I stand by my own words and no-one else's. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 07:44, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

That's cool. Given that you're citing WP policy regarding self-identification, please provide a scholarly citation supporting the article's implicit assertion that Brandon Teena self-identified with male personal pronouns. Alternately (and reasonably put) I think a scholarly citation supporting an assertion that Brandon consistently identified as a "transgendered male" will do. I understand how potentially sensitive this discussion is. My only concern is encyclopedic and my support of WP policy is a given. Meanwhile I've only ever seen unsupported assertions along these lines on advocacy sites and personal webpages. Gwen Gale 07:57, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Not required. He identified as male and you'll have to provide proof he didn't. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 07:58, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

You're making the assertion, not me. Gwen Gale 08:22, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

We should probably stop feeding the troll, anyway. A look at Gale's contributions reveals a lot of this sort of bizarre dispute-starting. Rebecca 08:01, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Please provide some diffs to support that assertion, thanks. Gwen Gale 08:19, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Agreed. Goodnight Gale. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 08:03, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

We have some troubling Wikipedia policy violations here:

• Rebecca has engaged in a personal attack by calling me a troll. Not only is this a policy issue, it focuses the discussion away from my reasonable requests for acceptable citations.

• User:RyanFreisling and Rebecca refuse to provide the requested citations.

So far, the use of male personal pronouns on the article appears to be unsupported, but retained in the article only by aggressive baiting and other threatening edits by two or more users. There may indeed be scholarly support for the use of male personal pronouns in this article, but it's not cited. Never mind you guys are calling me a troll and a transphobe or whatever, I utterly understand how you might misinterpret my questions and requests concerning such a sensitive and emotional topic. I support Wikipedia policy and accordingly would like to see some acceptable citations backing up these assertions. Gwen Gale 08:19, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

As I said, here's one from the BBC: "But Brandon's mother JoAnn is campaigning for justice for her child, who was born Teena Brandon but flipped her names when she started living as a boy." and "Brandon, 21, had lived as a boy for several years, strapping her breasts down, wearing men's clothes and padding her underwear with socks. She was also dating a woman, Lana Tisdale, who initially believed she was a boy but remained with her when she discovered the truth. Six days before she died Brandon was attacked and raped by Lotter and Nissen, who had recently found out she was actually a girl." [2] Brandon Teena was living as a man when he was murdered. QED. WP policy dictates we use male pronouns. Now stop it. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 08:23, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

User:RyanFreisling, thanks for that. It's a start. My first concern is that this news article doesn't refer to Brandon with male personal pronouns (it refers to Brandon as "she"). If anything, I think this supports changing the pronoun usage in the Wikipedia article (although I'm aware you choose to derive support strictly through your interpretation of the self-identification element of WP policy and I respect that).

As I said before, there may indeed be scholarly support for the assertion that Brandon self identified as a male transexual but while this BBC article uses the phrase "lived as a boy," while similar, that's not the same thing as "male transexual," nor is the BBC article a scholarly, peer reviewed journal. I know this seems to annoy you and I'm not happy about being a part of that. Meanwhile, I think the BBC article you've cited wholly supports changing the implementation of personal pronouns in the article. I would add that it at least supports the notion that such a change would not be considered vandalism and that the use of that term in revert headers is inappropriate. Gwen Gale 08:38, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

After having it explained to you a half-dozen times, I believe you now should know that press-identification is not the standard - self-identification is. The BBC citation (as well as many others) makes clear Brandon Teena's SELF-identification, and that's enough for WP. The pronouns THE PRESS employs are irrelevant. Your argument is specious, and yet you ignore the arguments of others. Honestly, Gwen, a reasonable person could at this point perceive your conduct as tendentious and your intention to be trolling. Please don't provide any more evidence to support that view. Last, have a great day.-- User:RyanFreisling @ 21:58, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Rebecca's news cites

"...killed in a farmhouse, along with two witnesses, because he reported being raped by Lotter...", "Chicago woman to wed inmate portrayed in movie 'Boys Don't Cry'", AP, 19 March 2006

"...was raped before he was brutally murdered by his male friends..." "Prisoners of Gender", Hindustan Times, 12 November 2005

"When his secret was discovered, Teena was raped and murdered by former friends." "A poignant case of hidden gender", Daily Telegraph, 17 April 2004

"... raped and killed in Nebraska 10 years ago after two male acquaintances found out that although he lived as a man", "Three go on trial in transgender hate crime case", Houston Chronicle, 15 March 2004

"...raped and later murdered by two men after they discovered he wasn't born a man.", "Killing helped advance transgender rights", The Columbian, 1 January 2004

"...raped and later murdered by two men after they discovered he wasn't born a man." "Community remembers tragedy that inspired 'Boys Don't Cry' Killing spurred activism among transgendered", Charleston Gazette, 29 December 2003

"Prosecutors said he was killed in a farmhouse on New Year's Eve 1993", "Death row inmate loses appeal for DNA testing", AP, 27 September 2003

"...did not surgically transition to male but successfully passed for a long time preceding his death...", "Sex and Sensibility", The Washington Post, 10 November 2002

I think the onus is on you to find sources for your claims. Rebecca 09:18, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

I'm not making any claims. You are making the claims. I've looked into the citations you provided and so far, have found the following:

• "...killed in a farmhouse, along with two witnesses, because he reported being raped by Lotter...", "Chicago woman to wed inmate portrayed in movie 'Boys Don't Cry'", AP, 19 March 2006

This Googles on three personal blogs but I can't find any confirmation it's a genuine AP quote. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• "...was raped before he was brutally murdered by his male friends..." "Prisoners of Gender", Hindustan Times, 12 November 2005

This seems to appear on a single Indian website. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• "When his secret was discovered, Teena was raped and murdered by former friends." "A poignant case of hidden gender", Daily Telegraph, 17 April 2004

This doesn't Google at all. Unverified. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• "... raped and killed in Nebraska 10 years ago after two male acquaintances found out that although he lived as a man", "Three go on trial in transgender hate crime case", Houston Chronicle, 15 March 2004

This doesn't Google at all. Unverified. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• "...raped and later murdered by two men after they discovered he wasn't born a man.", "Killing helped advance transgender rights", The Columbian, 1 January 2004

This Googles to a single blog. Unverified Gwen Gale 10:05, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• "...raped and later murdered by two men after they discovered he wasn't born a man." "Community remembers tragedy that inspired 'Boys Don't Cry' Killing spurred activism among transgendered", Charleston Gazette, 29 December 2003

This Googles to a CNN article and some personal sites that copied it. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• "Prosecutors said he was killed in a farmhouse on New Year's Eve 1993", "Death row inmate loses appeal for DNA testing", AP, 27 September 2003

This Googles to a single personal/advocacy blog but I can't find any confirmation it's a genuine AP quote. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• "...did not surgically transition to male but successfully passed for a long time preceding his death...", "Sex and Sensibility", The Washington Post, 10 November 2002

This Googles to a single advocacy site but I can't find any confirmation that it's a genuine Washington Post quote. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Most of your citations don't verify to the cited source, but to personal blogs and advocacy sites (or not at all). So far your assertion that Brandon Teena was very widely referred to as "he" in the press at that time seems to be unsupported.

Moreover, you have not yet responded to my request for citations supporting your assertion that like Wikipedia, the vast majority of the reputable press has similar points in their manuals of style. Gwen Gale 09:47, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Nice try. No, they do not verify to personal blogs and advocacy sites. They verify to Factiva, the massive Dow Jones-run database of most newspaper articles from virtually all major newspapers in the last three decades. The vast majority of newspaper articles are, if they are put online at all, taken down by most newspapers, which should be strikingly obvious to anyone who has even attempted basic research online, which is why they are not in Google.

Should you choose to actually go to a library and check Factiva (should you not have access yourself), or, god forbid, check the newspapers themselves (since I have provided enough information for you to do so), feel free. In my search, I found virtually no references to Brandon Teena as "she" in the past five years (since the AP changed its manual of style, and the vast majority of others followed suit). I have provided the proof; it is now up to you to actually provide any evidence of your claims that any reputable source (let alone the majority of them) continues to refer to Brandon Teena as "she". Rebecca 10:43, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

• Most AP articles linger on at least a few scattered and sundry sites licensed to carry them for years on end. There should be more evidence of their existence on the open web.
• If you haven't seen Brandon referred to as a she, I can only offer the following quick and unscientific spot check:

First ten hits for "Brandon Teena" on Google (These can change depending on what server one gets)

Crime Library refers to BT as a she.

In this interview Teena's mother refers to BT as a she.

JusticeJunction refers to BT as a she.

The first review at imdb refers to BT as a she.

GLBTQ, an advocacy site, refers to BT as a he.

An editorial review at Amazon.com refers to BT as a he.

The UBL site has an empty scrapper template for BT with no content.

This personal advocacy page contains both he and she references to BT.

Gender.org, an advocacy site, uses skilled (and in my humble opinion very acceptable) writing techniques to avoid the use of personal pronouns for BT altogether.

Afterellen.com, an advocacy site, refers to BT as a he.

Meanwhile your sarcasm and personal attacks are not helpful. Please stop that. Please support your assertion that like Wikipedia, the vast majority of the reputable press has similar points in their manuals of style. So far, I think I've at least demonstrated that referring to Brandon Teena as a she is not vandalsim, nor the act of a troll. Moreover, User:RyanFreisling has shown that the BBC referred to BT as a she. Gwen Gale 10:51, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

I've pointed out that there were very few references to Brandon Teena as "she" in the English-language press in the last five years (since the AP changed their MOS), or at least not out of the millions of articles archived on Factiva. I've given you a sample from a wide variety of different, highly-reputable news sources. You've given me one article. I also find it amusing that the same person who was three hours ago insisting on "scholarly citations" is now relying on an IMDB review and two personal websites to try and back up her argument. Rebecca 11:15, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

I have a number of concerns here:

• You have not at all supported your assertion that there are very few references to BT as a she in the English-language press and your assertions that you have done are troubling.

• Moreover, the cites you provided to support the use of he mostly don't verify at all, except mostly to advocacy sites. This doesn't at all match previous experiences I've had in successfully tracking down wire and print articles on the web. Yeah, this may bear further work on my part.

• Your subjective use of the term "highly reputable" is fraught with opportunities for PoV, intimidation, misunderstanding and unsupported assertion.

• I haven't given you any articles at all. User:RyanFreisling provided the article in response to a request I made.

• I specifically characterized the Google spot check as unscientific and provided it to you only as a courtesy, to show you that BT is indeed referred to as a she in the mainstream. I'd never use a personal website to support any edit I might make to an article (and I don't think I ever have). Please don't conflate my good faith attempt to quickly show you some casual pronoun usage with my request that you provide scholarly, peer reviewed support for the use of male personal pronouns in the article.

• As an aside though, and an important one, I do assert that referring to the murder victim as a she is neither trollish, transphobic, nor vandalism, as demonstrated by the BBC article cited by User:RyanFreisling and the interview with BT's mother which appears on the commercial site in the Google list (yes, I'm finally "giving" you a single article, but only to support this, my only direct assertion so far).

• Please support your assertion that like Wikipedia, the vast majority of the reputable press has similar points in their manuals of style. Gwen Gale 11:30, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

I have given you plenty of sources for Brandon Teena being referred to as "he" in a variety of highly reputable mainstream media, and I have given you enough information to verify this on your own, whether by Factiva itself or by checking newspaper archives. I have pointed out that I found very, very few sources that referred to him as "she", which you are welcome to also verify by Factiva. If your "successful experience in tracking down articles" involves whacking a few words into Google, I suggest you get some more experience. Nearly all of the "mainstream" sources you referred to referred to him as he; only an IMDB review and two personal websites referred otherwise. This is not verifiable evidence in the slightest. I've indulged you and provided sources to counter your claims; you have not provided the slightest evidence to back up your own. If you want anyone to take you seriously, you'll have to abide by our basic standards of verifiability. Rebecca 11:50, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

I haven't referred to any mainstream sources but one! Are you carefully reading my posts or what? Anyway, here is a list of five raw URLs to either mainstream commercial media or educational sites (one additional personal page at an edu is included because it looks reliable) which refer to BT as a she:

http://www.highbeam.com/doc/1P1-47345400.html
http://net.unl.edu/swi/pers/tbrandon.html
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/americas/3219591.stm
http://www.jour.unr.edu/outpost/entertainment/ent.alian.boysdontcry.html
http://www.yaleherald.com/archive/xxix/2000.01.14/ae/p18dontcry.html
http://archive.salon.com/ent/col/srag/2000/03/09/peirce/index.html

It is clear that both pronoun usages occur in what you would call "highly reputable" MSM sources. What I'd like to see is scholarly support for the use of a male pronoun. Gwen Gale 12:02, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Oh, and I'd still like to see some support for your assertion that like Wikipedia, the vast majority of the reputable press has similar points in their manuals of style. Gwen Gale 12:12, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

The first link refers to an AP story before they changed their MOS in late 2001, so that isn't particularly relevant these days. The second has quotes from a lot of biased parties, with both used about equally. The third was quoted above. The fourth is a movie review from some random university student website, and hardly very reliable. The fifth is a movie review from a student newspaper. And the sixth is an opinion piece on a website. You are trying to claim that this article should use female pronouns, yet so far you've been able to come up with all of one instance of that usage in a reputable source. Until you actually provide some sort of reputable evidence to back up your claims (beyond citing random websites you found in Google), then I think we're wasting our time here. Rebecca 12:18, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

First, you're mistaken about those links. The first is a copy of an Associated Press article referring to BT as a she. The second is a personal page at an edu site which I threw in only because it seems well-written. The third is a BBC article referring to BT as a she. The fourth is a University of Nevada Outpost movie review. The fifth is a Yale Herald article and the sixth is Salon. "one instance of that usage in a reputable source"? Hardly. My only purpose in citing these particular examples is to support my assertion that referring to BT as a she is neither trollish, nor transphobic, nor vandalistic. By the bye her mother refers to her as a she, as referenced above. Please stop misrepresenting the content of my posts, thanks. Gwen Gale 14:29, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Anyway... "Claims"? Sorry, you're clearly not reading my posts (maybe skimming though, then glancing at the links but only to find stuff to criticize or whatever). Please support the article's use of male pronouns with scholarly citations. You have not done so. Gwen Gale 13:53, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] "Girls Don't Cry"

There's a question whether the Pet Shop Boys song is really inspired by the movie. The citation I managed to locate is here, in what seems to be a fansite of some sort. The site attributes the information to the PSB official site, which is flash-based and therefore not very searcheable or linkable. I googled part of the quote he provides, and I can't find another source for it. Quite a few people seem to believe the song is about BT, but a solid citation from the songwriters would be preferable. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 17:05, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

Try this hard string search on Google, 75 hits with only the 3 specific text strings within the quotes, "Brandon Teena" "Pet Shop Boys" and "Girls Don't Cry" although some of those listed are but mirrors of this article. Gwen Gale 17:20, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Speaking of citations

I would like to respectfully point out that the article cites this BBC article as support that Brandon was transsexual. The article refers to her as "she" and as a "girl." I don't agree with the usage of pronouns in the Wikipedia article. However, as I've said previously I have no wish to edit war over it and will not, but only would like to remind that pronoun usage in no way defines trollish or vandalistic behaviour in the context of this article. Thanks for listening. Gwen Gale 11:01, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

In and of itself, no - but repeating your fallacious argument over and over again (is it a dozen times now?) on an article about a transgendered murder victim could easily be interpreted that way by some editors.

If you're wiling to leave the issue alone, then do so already. Stop repeating your tired and erroneous claim that the usage of pronouns in the press should determine WP pronoun usage rather than the WP policies regarding self-identification. Feel free to take your argument to the WP policy area governing pronoun usage. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 14:38, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

Please review WP:No personal attacks and WP:Civil, thanks. Gwen Gale 15:07, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

My comments were neither uncivil nor a personal attack. Don't throw those around so flippantly. If you have valid complaints, you know where to raise them. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 15:10, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

Editors who bring up this issue on this talk page are not trolls or vandals, which is all I have to say here. I suggest you think long and hard before carrying on with your personal attacks and uncivil behaviour towards my good faith, citation-supported comments on this talk page. Please drop it and I'll drop it. Thanks. Gwen Gale 15:17, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

Please see my comment above. I trust you realize that ongoing, persistent attempts to ignore WP pronoun usage policy on a BIO page of a murdered transsexual (rather than dealing with the policy issue on the relevant page) is a bad idea. Such conduct only erodes any validity an editor's argument might have had. If you're not interested in disrupting WP, you should choose another forum to resolve the policy question.

Since you started the thread, I hope you'll not require the last word - as I'm happily dropping the issue here, with this response - if you want to make constructive improvements, you might want to stop using a BIO of a transsexual murder victim to debate WP pronoun usage for transsexuals. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 15:27, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

I support WP policy, am sensitive to the article's content and have no wish to disrupt the article. Thanks for taking the time to reply. Gwen Gale 15:44, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

I've decided to stop watching this article. I have too many worries of my own about arguing over murder-victim Teena Brandon's corpse (so to speak, anyway). This is a public wiki and since I edit here under WP policy I'm ok with the consensus of editors who disagree with me on the points I've raised. Thanks for listening and cheers to everyone :) Gwen Gale 14:44, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Help with References

Ok, so I tried cleaning up the referances a little bit because they were hard to accsess and understand... at least for me. Could someone work on them? I just made in worse >.< Eirra 18:24, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, I reverted your repeated placement of the same link as overkill. As far as the changes to the content, my gut tells me that the prior version was superior, but I'll take a look when I can... --- User:RyanFreisling @ 18:27, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

K, thanks. Yeah, sorry. I basiccly found the infoprmation and put it in, but, yes I could have done a better job. Sorry. Anyways, the prior version was extremly short and undetialed. Eirra 17:57, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Tone

Indeed, with regards to content, caution should be exhibited. When content/context is added, we need to be careful to use encyclopedic language. The article is tending to read like a novelette. ZueJay (talk) 22:53, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry. Basiclly, I got the information put in, but it definetly does need some revising. Eirra 17:57, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Carolyn Gage's essay 'Unmaking of a Lesbian'

Is simply not notable enough to be encyclopedic on an article about Brandon Teena, and I've reverted the inclusion of the link by anon. Sorry, but it's my opinion (pretty strong opinion after a bit of research) that Gage's essay (posted on an unverifiable web site, no less) simply does not meet the standards to be cited as a valid source on WP, in terms of notability, undue weight, verifiability, etc. for starters. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 23:09, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

I agree entirley. After reading the article, I find it unreliable (there were several statments that contradicted with other information that most sources agree on) and it seemed to come from a VERY biased and untrustworthy view. It seems someone has added it back, however. I'd rather not get into an edit war, but I do agree on this issue. Eirra 16:00, 16 March 2007 (UTC)

I read parts of the essay, and it seems to be promoting an agenda rather than providing information about Brandon Teena's life and death. I think its strongly POV nature advises against including it in Wikipedia, unless in the context of an opinion of one of the transgender-related articles. In that sense the website (rather than the specific essay) is rather important, because it delineated a not-often-exposed reaction of the transgender identity. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 14:45, 17 March 2007 (UTC)

I don't agree that the website is important, in and of itself... it is unverifiable (there is no identification of the organization involved) and non-notable (it does not appear to be well-known at all). The anti-transgender views of some radical feminists is well-known (Janice Raymond's book, for example) but this website is an anonymous set of essays and as such doesn't meet the level of reputability to serve as a source for WP... and of course incorporating the POV of such radical feminist condemnation to the bio page of a murdered transsexual is highly questionable. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 15:23, 17 March 2007 (UTC)

I see your point. Clearly, I need to do more research into the subject. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 08:52, 18 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Dropping random names

The article drops random names as if we are supposed to know who they are. Editing for proper introductions to people requested.

-- unsigned at 10:23, 28 March 2007 by

User:168.254.226.151

Thanks for pointing this out - there's a low-key edit war over the cited material that introduces these names. An IP editor who claims to have been there, but has not yet provided contradictory sources of information, keeps blanking the bit that intro's those names. ZueJay (talk) 14:56, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Did Brandon Teena date Lisa Lambert?

An anon keeps reverting the section stating that Brandon Teena had dated Lisa Lambert prior to the murders, citing personal experience. Needless to say, that's not sufficient for WP. The anon then put a link in to what appears to be a Dutch site, without apparent attribution or verifiability that did not appear to back up the assertion. In a few minutes of searching I found this:

(December 03, 1996) Marvin Thomas Nissen, serving a life sentence for the 1993 shooting deaths of Brandon Teena, his girlfriend Lisa Lambert, and friend Phillip DeVine, will try to convince the State Supreme Court in Nebraska this week that he deserves a new trial due to errors made by police and the judge. [3]

On 31 December, Nissen and Lotter went to the home of Brandon's girlfriend Lisa Lambert and killed her, Brandon and a friend of theirs, Philip Devine. [4]

If there is indeed a source to substantiate they were not dating, please provide it. I frankly don't care about this issue either way, but we need to reflect the verifiable facts of this case in the article, not anonymous accounts. Thoughts? -- User:RyanFreisling @ 14:31, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

I am the anon you talk of and I am at a loss of how to provide proof of what is in my head. My ex is the former Carrie Gross, Lisa Lamberts roommate at the time of the murders. This is substantiated in both a book "All She Wanted", thru numerous articles on line, and several TV shows including A&E American Justice "The Life and Death of Teena Brandon" plus the doc "The Brandon Teena Story". If anyone would know the actual facts it would be Lisa Lamberts former roommate. She has stated that Brandon and Lisa were never an item and never dated. I have yet to see any truly verifiable source that says they were actually dating. As for me, I have a site on Yahoo: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Brandon93/ It is a member only site to keep out porn bots, so just ask and I will be more than happy to open the door for you. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 12:04, 31 March 2007 (talk • contribs) 63.215.29.115.

Unfortunately WP isn't a news agency, and since your representation is also not a first hand account, but only hearsay ('my ex knew the victim'), I can't see how WP can accept your account as fact without verifiable, notable corroboration. Right now, GLAAD and other sources represent Lisa Lambert as Brandon's 'girlfriend', making the clear representation that they were 'a couple' at the time of the murders. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 22:22, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

I am trying to understand your point. How is it GLAAD has information that is correct, when I knew the victim on a personal basis and mine is hearsay? My ex not only knew all 3 victims, she was living in the same house as all 3. How is it GLAAD knows more than any of us who were there? I am trying to understand what makes them a verifiable source of information over someone they never knew, and not a spinner of tall tails to advance their own agenda.

Here's the short version - I think it's clear WP cannot recognize you as a valid source of information for the following reasons: 1. you are an anonymous user claiming to have knowledge that contradicts a notable source's account of a public event. You need to establish your identity and credentials as a witness and provide your account in some other forum (because WP is an encyclopedia, not a news agency) or point to a notable, verifiable source that has already published an account that corroborates your view. If you have any more questions about your validity as a source for the article, I recommend you raise the issue on one of the administrators' pages, like WP:AN/I. -- User:RyanFreisling @ 00:59, 1 April 2007 (UTC)

No. No more questions. I am done with wiki. Thanks for checking out my web site to verify who I am. Good day.