Talk:Endgame (Derrick Jensen books)
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[edit] Balance
Nice article. It needs balance and context, relation to previous works by other authors, the school of thought it is from, the school of thought its critics are from, its critics and what they say about it. -- Stbalbach 15:38, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Pacifism
this paragraph is hard to read. its is very unclear what Jensen's position is on pacifism b/c the jumble of sentences goes back and forth between what he's refuting and what he's acknowledging. There are too many non-Jensen quotes here and quote-for-quote it is hard to understand whether jensen is agreeing or disagreeing. It would be better to state jensen's position first instead of stating his negative position b/c it makes jensen look like he doesn't have a certain opinion on pacifism, which shouldn't be the case given the heading of the paragraph. - hypomnemata nov.27th 2006, 12pm
