Talk:H2O: Just Add Water
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[edit] Organization
I'm unfamiliar with this show, but this article seems full of repetitive language and inconsistent headings. I'd recommend some work done to improve this article's clarity.
- Agreed. I do plan on attacking this article when I have a sizable amount of time to dedicate to it. I just ask for a bit of patience :) -- Huntster T • @ • C 01:34, 2 February 2007 (UTC)
Hunster man... You removed our "incongruities section..." I hardly thought magic powers needed to be removed too... Look at the current state of the article, it features the line "Emma turned into the super dragon trainer". Not only is it misleading, its actually hilarious.
Fine, I'll rewrite this page, it certainly needs it.
Ok, I've thought about it and this article needs new headings. I'm thinking:
Plot Characters Themes Motifs Seasons : Season 1 (summary and list of episodes) Season 2 External Links
Complications needs to be removed completely. It should be included within the season summary.
[edit] Copyvio
I didn't want to mark the page for speedy deletion, but the "Plot" section is a direct copy-and-paste from the copyrighted series website at http://www.jonathan-m-shiff.com.au/h2o/ -- it needs a rewrite, which I'll leave to someone more familiar with the series. -- Robster2001 00:52, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, this will eventually be taken care of when I have enough time to dedicate to it. -- Huntster T • @ • C 04:36, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
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