Talk:Henry Black
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The article needs cleaning up in a few areas, sections such as
In 1917 he tried his hand at...
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In the years before Black arrived in Regina, there was only one house builder, but in the next few years the boom came and he built around 150 houses - a record for those days.
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More Saskatchewan residents were killed by influenza than died on the battlefields in Europe. Virtually all public gatherings were banned, including movies, vaudeville performances, concerts, and even church services.
need style editing, preferably from an expert who can supply some wanted sources.Australian Matt 05:02, 11 January 2007 (UTC)