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[edit] What.....huh?
Where did those great images? Put them back on.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by Senators (talk • contribs).
- The images included in the article were not free and have been removed from the Wikipedia servers. Does anybody have any pictures of the VE Commodore that they have taken them selves? I so can you please upload them. Regards OSX 00:29, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Simple tips to improve your article
The tips that are listed below you can read them at your on will and accord; they are not criticizing the creator or any contributors of this article in any way:
To much information on the opening paragraph this will confuse and discourage you readers.Need a picture at the top of the article so the reader can automatically see the car without scrolling down.There is a big space after the Specifications section please fix that.
In final, there is some edits to do but most are easy fix, a like all the pictures you have on the commodore, good work. Senators 06:04, 6 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Gearbox comment
In my opinion "tired old gearbox" has no place in a encyclopaedia, it's not exactly true either it has been worked over. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 60.224.27.136 (talk • contribs).
[edit] Generations
This is the forth generation commodore. Generations generally refer to new models. Therefore we would have VB-VL as 1st gen, VN-VS as 2nd gen, VT-VZ as 3rd and the VE as forth - Cartman02au 10:36, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
- I do see your point. Perhaps it would be a good idea to remove the word 'generation' and just leave "VE Commodore is the fourteenth, and current model of the Holden Commodore." VectorD 04:22, 18 December 2006 (UTC)
