Talk:Jack's River
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This article REALLY needs cleanup. It currently reads as some kind of cross between a travelogue and a protest/complaint. There are no references or links, and the writing style is very conversational. Maybe this should be reverted back to the version immediately previous to the "All these rivers are yours" comment. I am a bit new here, so I would appreciate any advice. Thanks! Mutableye 04:02, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
I changed the text in question, but I'm still not really sure all this info about camping restrictions and whatnot is that important, considering there is no other information about Jack's River in the article. I also think I did the link wrong and should have used it as a source, maybe...I'm still getting the hang of the Wiki format. At least it looks better than the previous version! Mutableye 16:42, 29 August 2006 (UTC)