Talk:Louis Edouard Bouët-Willaumez

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[edit] WPMILHIST Assessment

This is a very nice start, and I offer thanks for including a picture. However, it needs just a little clean-up. The introduction is very brief, and tells us (within the first sentence) absolutely nothing about Bouet-Willaumez except that he was a French admiral. The introduction should include at least a small reference to his significance or notability, and/or a mention of which conflicts he took part in. Also, the grammar of the entire article needs some serious reworking. LordAmeth 09:20, 29 November 2006 (UTC)

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Talk:Louis Edouard Bouët-Willaumez

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