Talk:Lurita Doan
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[edit] removed opinion
It's generally not a good idea to write a factual article based on opinion. Here is the reference I removed.
- (opinion) Fighting Gov't Waste: An Act Of Terrorism? [1]
Kgrr 22:01, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Exceptional claims require exceptional sources WP:SOURCE
"NTMI is responsible for approximately 80% of the security and surveillance technology protecting the U.S. borders with Canada and Mexico" [citation needed].
I could not find anything except for a a UT Alumni article to back this exceptional claim. 80% supplier is a very very high market penetration for any business, especially government. In a competitive field such as technology, a market penetration of 30% is extremely good. Please find a credible source to back this rather exceptional claim.Kgrr 14:11, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
