Talk:Moka5
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this article reads more like a commercial blurb than anything else. Anyone have some impartial information?
The text is copied directly from moka5 web site. A description is needed, this text never tells even what moka5 is, instead it only points some superlative and glowing words about the Product.
[edit] Rewrite Mostly Finished
I just happened to notice that this article was in dire need of a complete rewrite, so I stepped up to the plate and just went ahead. Note, this is probably not all I will do, just all I will do for now. Please help me fix any errors I may have added.
Although I may not have been logged in for all of them, here is a list of the edits I have done:
Removed Un-Neutral Point of View problem
Added Overview + Features + Links Sections
Added Pros and Cons Section + See Also Section
Nekiruhs 00:37, 27 January 2007 (UTC)
Thank you :-). I would have done it myself but I'm too busy with school and etcetera. Apparently, the main hobby of stidents 14-18 is vandalizing Wikipedia, so I'm blocked from editing except from home. atomicthumbs 03:25, 27 January 2007 (UTC)